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So, you want to go to grad school? Nail the inquiry email

Maybe you’ve always know you’ve wanted to be a research professor in wildlife ecology. Perhaps you’ve just taken a course on fungi and stumbled into a whole new world of career possibilities. Either way, getting past the first step– your undergraduate degree– and onto the academic path isn’t easy.

Academic culture isn’t always intuitive. Many undergraduates aren’t getting the mentoring they need to successfully pursue their career goals (and this is true at every career stage, really), once you’ve discovered what those might be. If you’re an undergraduate with some sense that you might need higher education to pursue your dream job– or at least decide what that is– the idea of graduate school can be intimidating. As I work through my second round of graduate applicants, I’ve found that many students are poorly prepared for the process of finding a mentor and and reaching out with that first, inquiry email. It’s unfortunate, because that is the very first step in the process; you could be shutting yourself down without even having a real chance at your dreams.

Are you not sure where to start? Are you applying to schools without ever having contacted a mentor? Do you know the difference between a resume and a CV? Are you bombarding list-servs with emails about your passion for the natural world and what a hard worker you are (pro-tip: don’t do this)? This guide is for you.

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Applying to graduate school should not be a random process! Do your homework first. Image courtesy of PhDComics.

THINGS TO DO LONG BEFORE YOU WRITE AN INQUIRY EMAIL

Get field and lab experience while you’re still in college. Before you even think about applying to graduate school, you should be looking for opportunities to work in labs. It’s okay if you’re not interested in Drosophila research (as an example); working in a Drosophila lab will teach you a lot about the process of science itself, and give you a huge edge when you apply. You’ll also get a sense of what you like and dislike, and where your strengths and weaknesses are. Check your university for positions, and keep an eye on society listings for job postings for summer research assistants. The ESA Student Section has a nice collection of resources here.

Cultivate relationships with potential letter writers. As part of your graduate school application, you’ll need letters of recommendation from around three references. These should ideally be from researchers you have worked with, an advisor, and/or faculty you have taken multiple courses with. Do not ask a professor who taught the 300-student lecture you took three years ago for a letter– you’ll want these to be people who can really comment on your work ethic, ability to work independently and with others, your sense of drive and creative thinking skills, or other attributs. Ideally, letters can help bolster applications with holes, e.g, “Tom had a rough start academically but really came into his own when he discovered ecology, and I’m confident that he’s found his groove and will be a great asset to any lab.” Note: you will not generally ever see the contents of these letters, so make sure they’re from people who know you and are in a position to write good things about you.

Read papers. The best advice I got from my undergraduate advisor when it came to preparing for graduate school was to read, read, read, and read some more. I knew I wanted to do paleoecology, but didn’t have a good sense of what was out there, so I dove into the literature and came up with a dream list of researchers who were doing interesting work.

THINGS TO DO WHEN YOU’RE READY TO CONTACT POTENTIAL ADVISORS

Organize your CV. A Curriculum Vitae, or CV, is like an academic version of the resume, but it is not a resume. I repeat: A CV is not a resume. CV’s may be more than a page long, and should include everything about you that’s relevant– your educational background, work experience, publications, presentations, awards and honors, etc. I strongly recommend reading several CVs before you build your own, especially from researchers from different stages. As an undergraduate, you may not have a lot for most of the sections you see on examples, but you can also add other elements (e.g., relevant coursework) that you’d later take off as you progress. Don’t put anything on your CV that you started before college– no high school grades– and avoid part-time jobs that aren’t directly related to the work you want to do (wilderness first responder is ok, bakery cashier is not). I strongly recommend starting a CV as early as possible in your career, and adding honors, research experiences, and other achievements as they happen (trust me, you’ll forget). If you’re unclear about the difference between a CV and a resume, start here.

Write a concise, tailored, informative, and mature inquiry email. You’ve got a dream list of prospective advisors, or perhaps have come across an advertisement for a funding opportunity you’re really interested in. If you don’t, go back to the literature, talk to your undergraduate advisor, and figure out who you’d like to work with. In the sciences, at least, you are very unlikely to be accepted to a graduate program if you don’t have a faculty advisor willing to work with you.

When you’re ready to contact people, take some time to craft a brief, informative email that is individually tailored. For example*:

Dear Dr. Rosalind Darwin,

I recently read your paper, Snails are way cooler than slugs, and am very interested in your work on the importance of shells in determining awesomeness in invertebrates. I am a senior a the University of Science, where I am working with Dr. Advisor on a senior thesis about how beetles are also very cool, using tools our lab has developed linking wing shininess to coolness. I’ll be graduating this fall with a BS in Biology, and I was wondering if you have any graduate opportunities available in your lab? Until recently, my background was in plants, and I was wondering if you’ve considered testing whether the plant the snail is on affects how awesome it is? In graduate school, I’d like to apply my research to conservation, particularly in relation to climate change and other threats. My goal is to be a research professor working at the interface of conservation biology and landscape coolness, with a strong policy relevance.

I have attached a copy of my CV for your consideration, and would be very interested in discussing possibilities with your lab.

Respectfully,

Undergraduate Student

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Find a comfortable setting, free of distractions, to compose your inquiry email. Don’t blow it!

Note how this letter uses the appropriate salutation (not “hey prof,” or “Hi Mrs. Darwin” or “Yo,” or “Hi Chaz.”). Seriously: I have not responded to emails that addressed me as “Mrs.” — or worse, “Mr.” Gill” (It’s Dr. Gill, Professor Gill, or, at the very least, Jacquelyn Gill. Spell the name correctly. By tailoring the inquiry, as I’ve done in my example, you show that you’re not on a fishing expedition by directly connecting your interests with the researcher’s, and shows that you’ve done your homework. The example also gives Dr. Darwin a better sense of what your interests and goals are.

Don’t lie, but don’t be your own worst enemy. Tell the truth about your research interests and goals, even if you’re not completely sure what those are. Obviously, doing some hard thinking about what those goals actually might be is an important part of this process. Some advisors won’t be interested in working with you unless your goals are to obtain a PhD and work at a major research university, and so don’t be afraid to aim high and sound confident. Having said that, don’t say you absolutely want to get a PhD to study exactly what your prospective advisor studies, and to work at a top research university if it’s not true. If you want to use graduate school as the opportunity to decide whether academia is for you, that’s okay; just be up front about that, without sounding wishy-washy. Don’t use the inquiry letter as a therapy session; minimize personal details, and emphasize the positive. Don’t trash talk your previous advisors or institutions. Don’t copy text from your prospective advisor’s website and past after the words “I would really like to research_____.” Don’t lie about whether you’re applying to other programs (remember that even if you end up not studying with a particular person, they may end up reviewing your grant applications or papers). Don’t sound too tailored, in other words, and be honest, straightforward, enthusiastic, but not pandering. Keep your language professional, but don’t be afraid to sound enthusiastic– but keep your feet on the ground (no poetry or hyperbole). If this all sounds like a tough balance to strike, that’s because it is– but remember that if you’re disingenuous or trying to hard, it will show. It’s always a good idea to show other people (including your undergraduate advisor!) a draft of your email before you send it!

Don’t treat graduate school inquiries as though you’re applying for a position in a marketing firm. Career Services centers are often very poorly equipped to advise students when it comes to applying for academic positions (see the resume versus CV discussion above). For your inquiry letter, avoid what I call “business school language.” Notice how in the example above, I didn’t include anything like “I am a highly motivated student, committed to academic excellence.” That’s what I want to see in your letters of recommendation, not in your inquiry email. In other words, show, don’t tell. Your first sell, to me, is your brain– I’m interested in whether you’d be a good fit for the lab, and demonstrate an ability to think originally and well. Your CV should tell me if you’re a high achiever, whether you’ve done a lot of fieldwork in adverse conditions, and whether you’ve published. Saying “I have experience in conceiving, executing, and bringing to fruition an original research project” is pointless if your undergraduate thesis is listed on your CV, and just serves to make you come across as stiff or grasping.

Make sure you provide everything that is asked for, in the appropriate format. It may be that you end up responding to an advertisement instead of cold-emailing a professor. If that’s the case, follow the instructions to the letter: provide a CV (not a resume, and not a resume disguised as a CV), a cover letter only if asked, and any other relevant information. Don’t attach your transcripts, GRE scores, etc. unless explicitly asked for them. This sounds like a no-brainer, but a large proportion of the emails I receive don’t follow directions.

Applying to graduate school is a stressful process, but you can save yourself a lot of time, effort, and headache if you do a little background work and make sure you send targeted, well-crafted emails to the professors you’re interested in working with. They may not respond anyway (professors are notoriously busy and are often poor email communicators), but they’ll much more likely to respond than if you take the shot-gun approach.  You may get a polite response with an apology that the researcher lacks funding, in which case it’s always a good idea to research graduate funding opportunities, both broadly (like the NSF GRFP) and at your institution of choice. Almost always nowadays, graduate school starts with the first email; it’s the modern-day foot in the door. Your prospective advisor will not only guide you through the application process and advocate for you, they’ll also be the one you spend the next two to eight years with, mentoring you in your development as to an academic adult. You’re going to be a huge investment of their time, resources, and energy, and your letter really needs to show them that you have the independence, intellectual maturity, and professionalism to succeed as a student. Don’t blow it!

Good luck!

*As John Anderson–my undergraduate advisor!– notes in comments, you should not actually use the terms “awesome” or “coolness” in your letter, as I did in my tongue-in-cheek example. In a real-life example, those should be replaced with appropriate scientific terms. I also have to credit John with a lot of the advice I’m sharing about writing a well-tailored letter. It got me into graduate school, after all.

Edited to add: Check out this great post over at Dynamic Ecology on applying to grad school.

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  1. Dear Dr Jacquelyn,
    Thank you so much for the initiative of writing this blog, its still relevant even in 2022 and I couldn’t help myself but read through all the 252 comments today, as they were all helpful. I am finishing my thesis-based MSc in Conservation Biology at the University of CapeTown and I am looking at applying to further study in USA or Canada.

    I want to apply for a PhD program but I am a little bit scared because I feel I don’t have much knowledge and I have also encountered people saying PhD program is way more intense, depressing and very difficult. So I am thinking of going for another MSc program at least to enhance my scientific skill, before a PhD.

    How best can I encapsulate this in my inquiry email, won’t I be shooting myself already?

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  2. Hi Professor Gill,

    Still relevant in 2020. I sent an email to a pi and received the following response (see below). I am not sure how to respond. I was going to send the professor a 1 page project summary with aims and references, but I wasn’t sure if that was called for or if I should just thank him and hope to speak to him if I get invited for an interview?

    Gabriel,

    Thank you for reaching out. Looks like you have quite a bit of experience. Impressive.

    Lots of questions, all relevant with no doubt. I have answers for some, not for all, some things you have asked we have done and some are in progress, some other ones haven’t been explored yet. But perhaps we can leave that to a conversation whenever we have the chance. It would be too long and most likely incomplete try to address all your question in this email.

    But I guess the answer you care the most is whether I have room in the lab, and the answer is yes. Especially for highly motivated people that share the same interests I have.

    Good luck with your application to the MCP Program, I believe interviews are at the end of January, right?

    Happy Holidays,

    Andrea

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    1. Hi, I’m sorry I missed this until now. This is a very promising response, and I hope it worked out — I woulds read between the lines here that this is a case where knowing more about the specific process this department goes through would be informative. It sounds like they do a central interview process at that institution? Feel free to report back with how it went!

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    2. Hello Dr. Gill,
      I am wondering if you have advise for folks who have been graduated from undergrad for a while or maybe going into a different field than their undergrad.
      I finished my bachelors in 2014. When I was younger, I wasn’t totally sure of what I wanted to do. I definitely did not know I would want to go to graduate school years later (in a bit different field than my undergrad).
      The standard formula of an intro email doesn’t seem to highlight me.

      In my intro email should I:
      1. talk about my undergraduate research experiences that are not very relevant to what I want to study now (I do have more recent relevant field work (non-academic) and research experiences)
      2. talk about why I want to shift my career
      3. talk about my non-academic experiences

      Thanks for any advice you may have!

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  3. Hi,
    I’m not sure if you’re still taking questions or not, but I have one question I’m not sure what to do about. I emailed letters of intent to several potential advisors for graduate school and heard back from a few. After several weeks I sent out a follow up email to the ones I never heard from and several weeks later I still have not received a reply from any of those professors (I did recheck their email addresses). Would it be bad to send a letter of intent a third time to them or just assume they have no intention of accepting any new students for next fall or did not like my letter? Thank you.
    Heather

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  4. Dr. Gill,

    Your blog post is impressive with how it has stayed relevant for all of these years and that you are caring enough to continue to answer questions!

    I read through the post and comments, but I still have another question: What is your opinion on emailing the graduate coordinator of a program you are interested in, just to introduce yourself? Are introduction only emails annoying to faculty? This program’s website is very informative so I cannot think of a relevant question that would not seem as if I was wasting their time. I am not interested in the coordinator’s area of study but want to cast as wide of connection net as possible.

    Thank you!

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    1. I’m a graduate coordinator now (I wasn’t when I wrote this) and I can say I’m always happy to answer questions, but it’s always a good idea to do the reading first. It’s frustrating when students aren’t checking to see if the website covers their questions. You definitely don’t need to email grad coordinators, but if you have a question that’s not covered somewhere, it’s perfectly acceptable to do that. We’re often also regular faculty, too, so we’re often also overwhelmed with email, so like anything, I would say it’s a courtesy to be thoughtful in your communication, especially during the pandemic. So, TL;DR, not needed unless they tell you to explicitly or you have a question.

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  5. Thank you so much for sharing! Do you have any advice for students who do not have any lab experience or publications? I was a transfer student with one year left of school and most labs wanted at least three years dedicated. I have my bachelor of science and will be applying straight into a five-year doctorate program. I know I am capable and an asset but have no way of truly proving it. Thank you again for your time and advice!

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    1. This is tough, and it’s a competitive pool out there. Anything you can do to get some of that experience, even late in your undergraduate or after school, will help. Your best bet in these cases are often to talk to professors who know you from class, or a graduate student TA. Look for short-term lab and field jobs for the summer or coming year if you don’t get in, and don’t be afraid to look outside your institution. You might need to start with a volunteer experience first, just to get your feet wet. You might also consider being flexible and going for a Masters, which can give you experience with research in a more low-stakes way. Many faculty are hesitant to take a student right out of undergrad into a PhD, especially without a significant research experience.

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  6. Hi! This post has actually helped me a lot in drafting my mail for professors. However, I don’t think I’m done. My CV is not yet complete (with respect to appeal and spacings) and my SoP is not done. Moreover, I think the mails itself require slight corrections.
    Do you think it is too late to mail professors by late September? I think everything, including my ToEFL (which is next Saturday) and obtaining LoRs, will be done by then.

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    1. You should start the inquiry process long before you start your application. Just the CV is needed when you reach out. Work on that first, and don’t worry about the other application materials until you’ve been encouraged to apply. Your statement should be tailored to each lab/program, for example. Most application deadlines are in December or January, so you have time to get the other pieces together. Test scores are contingent on when exams are given, of course, and it’s good to give letter writers lots of notice, but overall, you don’t need a full application package just to send an inquiry email.

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      1. Thanks for the advice! I’ve sent one mail and will send another today or tomorrow. My GRE is done, my ToEFL is coming up in a few days, so that end is tieing up well! A brief outline of the SoP is quite done and I have to add more info based on each program. One letter writer has agreed, am God willing I’m going to ask the others before the end of the month or so.
        I hope things sort out well! I’m actually basing my mails on the fact that I am working on that very field at the moment, which is actually not so strong since this research work didn’t start much long ago and it doesn’t have much content to add to it. But hopefully, all things will turn out for good!

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  7. I really enjoyed the advice that you have given. I just wanted to know if it is actually appropriate in contacting prospective faculty that you may want to work with if for most of them you will be breaking contact with them sooner or later. Like what if the ball gets rolling and it rudely stops because you already chose someone?

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    1. We all know that you’re applying multiple places, and it’s okay to be up front about that. Rather than rudely stop, you can simply send a polite note thanking them for their time, and letting them know that you’ve decided to pursue an opportunity elsewhere. These may be your future colleagues, reviewers, postdoc advisors, etc., so it’s worth maintaining a professional relationship.

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  8. (I posted this comment before but I think for some reason it did not end up going through. Should there be a duplicate comment please feel free to delete one).

    Hi Dr. Gill,

    This has been a really helpful article and has really helped me reach out to a few professors! I did have one question though:

    I’m looking to apply to programs in viral immunology and I’ve emailed a few professors (two at my top choice and one at a mid-tier). The only response I’ve received so far (and it was sent the same day I sent my initial contact email) was:

    “Dear Omar,

    Thank you for you interest and interesting questions. Yes, I will be accepting rotation students.

    Good luck!”

    I attached my CV to this email as well and discussed my interest in the professor’s research and asked a question. I am, however, unclear on how to interpret this. Is this the professor’s way of encouraging me to apply or is the generic response an indicator that they really did not look at my CV or fully read my email and just quickly responded? How should I respond to this email?

    It may also be worth mentioning my undergraduate research is in Biochemistry and so I am looking to get into a field I have little experience in.

    Thanks in advance for any advice you have 🙂

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    1. Rotations are a different system than the one I described (which is where you apply to work in a specific lab rather than a program). For departments that do rotations, which is more common in chemistry and the biomedical fields, you apply to the graduate program, then do a rotation through various labs until you find a home. That process is a bit different, and doesn’t require a faculty commitment in advance. Your best bet is to follow up with the grad coordinator for that program.

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  9. Can you have extracurriculars on a CV? I am applying to PhD programs for chemistry. The graduate student I work for told me to include my volunteer work and that I was the recruitment chair in my sorority under extracurricular activities

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  10. Hey Dr. Gill,
    I feel like I am a younger applicant to the PhD programs im applying for (im 18 now, will be 19 at the time of enrollment in fall 2021) Do I address this in my personal statement? I feel like this can work against me since they will think I’m immature. Is it worth addressing somewhere in my application or should I not mention it unless asked about it in say an interview?

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    1. I wouldn’t mention your age; it’s not relevant. I would instead demonstrate your intellectual maturity by showing your curiosity, drive, and sense of purpose. If you want to mention you finished your undergraduate degree by a particular age, you can—it’s part of your narrative—but it’s not necessary. They have no way of knowing, though they’ll likely make some assumptions when they talk to you if you sound or look young. So if you can address this as part of your story, frame it around why you pursued higher education when you did, and your general passion and drive.

      Good luck!

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  11. This article was really helpful for me. Thank you, Dr. Gill.
    I’m graduating this year, and I’m looking for positions right now. A lot of people say that when asking about positions in a professor’s lab in one department you shouldn’t try to contact another professor in that department at the same time. However, I have worked on 2 projects, each in a different field, during my bachelor’s, and I like them both. (biomaterials and energy storage)
    I was wondering if it’s okay to email more than one professor who works on these subjects. Because it will take a long time if I have to wait like a week and see if a professor replies at all, and then email someone else. Would it be somehow inappropriate if a professor accepted me and then found out that I had emailed others in the department as well?

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    1. I think it’s ok if you have interests that overlap with multiple folks to email more than one, though there’s no harm in waiting if you’re early enough in the cycle (like now). Faculty recognize that you’re likely reaching out to multiple prospective advisors, and will understand that you’ve got to make the best choice for your goals. What I wouldn’t do is spam the entire department, including people whose research is very different. That comes across as insincere, desperate, or like you’re not a serious candidate.

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  12. I’m so glad you’re still responding to questions because you have helped me a lot! Actually, I did ask a question which you responded to several months ago. I plan to apply for grad school in marine biology for either spring 2021 or fall 2021. I have a BA in biology in 2015, but couldn’t land a research position in the field except volunteering at an aquarium 1/2 day once a week. Also what held me back was dealing with a bout of depression. I will soon be training as a Protective Species Observer in the Gulf of Mexico and am planning on having my inquiry letters and statement of purpose completed before I start any jobs. Just a few questions. Do I have to mention my bout with depression (also have been teaching swimming and supervising at a community center and I got my advanced diving certificate)? When should I send these letters out? Lastly, what kind of questions would you ask current grad students in the labs you were interested in and could I do that now? So far you’ve been a great help! Thank you!

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    1. You definitely don’t need to disclose anything about your history. You can simply say that in your time away, you’ve increasingly known that you want to pursue work in marine biology. You don’t feel satisfied, you miss school, there’s a hole in your life, you want to contribute to the problems you read about in the news, etc. Just acknowledge the time since you graduated, talk about how volunteering helped inspire and motivate you, state your motivation and move on to what you’d like to do.

      As far as questions floor other grad students, I’d ask things like:

      – What is the advisor’s mentoring style?

      – What is the lab/departmental culture like?

      – What is the community like?

      – How is funding? Can you survive on the stipend?

      – What are the opportunities for training? Does the advisor/department support non-academic careers?

      Basically, questions about what it’s like to be a grad student there, how well you’ll be supported, etc.

      Good luck!

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  13. Hello,

    I’m a sophomore and was wondering if it is a good or bad idea to email a faculty member for the graduate program I’m interested in, to ask for tips to becoming a strong candidate for that specific program. I really believe in everything the university is doing and feeling a little overzealous! I’m just trying to be authentic and in my draft I shared some of the work I’ve done in my field of interest but I’m afraid I’m over-sharing. Do they want to know if I’m an honors student? Thanks in advance!!

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    1. It’s great that you’re eager and excited, and it’s never too early to start thinking about this process. What I would recommend is first reaching out to faculty at your university, especially if you have an undergrad advisor, to ask them what to do now to prepare for grad school. Faculty have a lot of demands on our time, so it’s important that you first reach out to your existing networks and take advantage of opportunities to learn before you start emailing outside faculty. Find out what the scientific societies are in your field, and see if you can present at a conference. See if there are on-campus activities (panel discussions, etc.) for preparing for grad school. Talk to grad students at your university, if any, or if you can do a summer research program, talk to your mentors there. Build your network now, and seek out the webinars, blog posts, and other resources on the pathway to success in your field — that’s going to give you the best advice. I would not recommend reaching out to total strangers to ask for advice — you’re not likely to get a response.

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  14. I find this article very informative and really guiding.

    I, however, will like to know if it is really necessary to always attach a CV and/or undergraduate transcripts in the first contact email and is it okay to send in follow up emails if mentors are unable to reply and how long will it have to take before you can send in the follow up email.

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    1. I don’t recommend sending transcripts as a general rule unless asked for them. I think it’s a courtesy to send a CV with an inquiry email because it demonstrates that you’re prepared, and gives me a quick at-a-glance sense of your background, skills, and interests, so you can focus your email more on what you’d like to do for grad school. Not including a CV doesn’t help you, even if it may not necessarily hurt. I can’t really think of a reason why you wouldn’t want to unless you’re concerned about some issues on your CV, or it’s not as informative as you’d like. But if that’s going to be a deal-breaker for someone, you’d want to know that before you start the process, not halfway through!

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  15. Hi Dr. Gill,

    Thank you so much for posting this and offering insight from a faculty’s perspective. I have a masters degree in Microbiology and I’ve been trying to find a PhD in a country, different from where I went for my MSc so I’ve been sending out cold emails to potential faculty members whose research I find interesting and I’ve been getting responses like: sorry, I’m not taking on new students this year/I don’t have funding/a grant didn’t come through. Is it okay to check with them again later (about a year later) for any opportunities that may have opened up?

    Unfortunately, my undergraduate grades were subpar and don’t mirror my academic or research capabilities. However, I believe I made up for the lack in undergrad academic achievement with my masters degree, from which I graduated with distinction (total grade and thesis) as well as a summer research position that I undertook at the lab of one of my professors. Despite that, I have found that some faculty members are still hung up on my undergrad grades and at one point I was rejected from a program at a university for that reason. To be specific, last year, a potential PI agreed to chat with me over Skype to discuss his research interests and I thought it went well. Towards the end of the conversation, I mentioned that I’d applied to the department he was involved with but had just received a rejection and I was concerned it may have been due to my undergraduate grades, to which he tried to reassure me that my MSc should make up for that and he’d inquire after my rejection. A few weeks later, he emailed me saying that my undergrad grades were in fact the problem and he wouldn’t be able to argue against it. To be honest, it was very demotivating to hear and I am a little concerned that this will be a recurring issue with all faculty members I might want to reach out to.

    So I guess my questions are:

    1) Should I continue trying to reach out to other PIs from that department at that school or just forget about it?
    2) Can I reach out to PIs from another department at the same school?
    3) Has the ship for a career in research sailed because of my undergrad grades?

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    1. Sometimes “I’m sorry, I don’t have a grant” or “I’m not taking students right now” is a polite rejection, sometimes it’s the truth. It’s hard to know which, and it can’t hurt to follow up a year later, though you may get the same response. I have a student in my lab right now who I originally turned down two years ago, so you never know!

      As far as reaching out to other PIs in the same school: yes, that’s absolutely fine.

      Undergraduate grades are not as important to most PIs as research experience. It might be worth asking your mentors what might be holding you back — is it grades? Did you get a publication from your MS thesis (if not, this can be a red flag)? Do you not have the background for the programs you’re interested in? Sometimes, taking a few courses at a community college or local university and showing improvement over previous grades can help demonstrate your readiness, so think about that as an option.

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  16. I realize you started this wonderful post several years ago, but noticed some people recently contacting you so I thought I’d take a chance. I graduated in 2015 with a BA in biology and would like to to grad school next fall I very nervous about writing the perfect inquiry letter to professors so your article has helped a lot. My questions are geared more to how to explain certain things. I took the few marine biology courses my school offered. I also did some group research projects and papers in the field. After researching articles by different professors I decided I was interested in the ecology of marine invertebrates. I have a few hurdles to jump and not sure how to address them. My GPA is only a 2.95 and I didn’t too well on the GRE despite tutoring due to test anxiety. In the past 4 years I’ve been teaching swimming and am currently volunteering at a top aquarium 1 1/2 day a week (that’s all they allow you to do) with jellies. I had a minor in museum studies and did do a lot of volunteer work at the schools natural history museum as well as at a museum in New Zealand during junior year abroad. I am also an advanced scuba diver. I know what I want, I know I can be successful and I love to do research with marine life. Unfortunately, I don’t come across well with numbers or experience. How would you address such deficiencies to a potential adviser? I don’t want to wait any longer since I am anxious to get into the field and do research. Thank you for all you can help me with. Signed, lost!

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    1. Firstly, many schools are dropping the GRE as a requirement, so I would look into narrowing your search to those. Secondly, I would recommend seeing if you can take some more courses at a local community college, or a graduate-level class or two at your nearest university (in a non-degree option — many schools will let you do this) to show you can handle graduate-level coursework. I would also start looking for experiences where you can use your skills (e.g., SCUBA certification) to work closer to your fields of interest — are there seasonal jobs or even volunteer experiences where you can find someone who can write a good letter of recommendation for you? Those are going to be more important than grades for most people. Good luck!

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  17. Thank you for such an insightful article! Currently, I am a junior Clinical Laboratory Science major and have been planning to attend graduate school to pursue research in stem cell biology and regenerative medicine. After researching several institutions I’ve filed it down to 4 labs where are conducting research I am very interested in.

    Since I have not even finished my junior year yet, is it too early to send those PIs emails regarding my interest in their labs?

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    1. No, it’s not too early — you can let them know that you’re looking for programs starting in Fall 2021, and wanted to start a conversation now. Some of the programs in your field will be different in terms of the application process — more like a lab rotation, so you don’t need to make that inquiry. So I would actually start first by connecting with faculty at your current university to see what the process and norms are for applying, and what you can do NOW to prepare for 2021.

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  18. Thanks. It’s really insightful. I also learnt so much from your replies to various questions. It might be nice to convert the questions and replies to a FAQ blog post.

    So I do have a question.

    I applied for a PhD program last year, did interviews, but didn’t get the admission.
    I am really interested in the program and intend to apply again this year, but I don’t how to go about contacting the professors again.

    Thanks again and I would really appreciate your input on my question.

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    1. I would reach out, thank them for their time, and ask if it’s worth applying again this year (or if they have any feedback about why you weren’t admitted). You may need to move on from this institution, though, so have a backup.

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  19. Hello Dr. Gill
    Very Informative article indeed.
    So I am an international student aiming for fall 2020 for PhD in Biosciences.program
    I am planning to start writing to professors from August mid week. I graduated with bachelors degree in 2017 and since then I am working as a research assistant in a lab. I don’t have any publications yet. I might be submitting one by the end of this year.
    So my mentor doesn’t want me to let the professors(whom I will be writing to) know what I am working on as she is insecure about the work getting stolen. So I don’t know how to proceed further? I would really appreciate your advice/suggestions on this.

    Thanks in Advance!

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  20. This article was incredible useful to me as I am applying to Physics graduate programs. I sent out two emails following your tips and received two polite responses in less than four hours. I am now wondering how to respond to them. Both emails simple and encouraged me to apply. Is it important to maintain a correspondence, or should i simply thank them for the reply and encouragement, and allow the conversation to end naturally there? Any help is appreciated, thank you again for a very insightful article!

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  21. Great information, even though would be uncomfortable using words like “cool”, the idea is great. I read this weeks ago before I decided to comment.

    I have my Masters and I hope to get into a doctoral program. I have emailed several prospective advisors, and it’s been a frustrating process. Sometimes I ask myself “How many people can I contact before I give up?”
    Many don’t reply (I guess they’re busy), but those that have, it was either : A) not taking students due to funding B) not taking students because they’re close to retiring or, C) I’m going to be honest here…..weren’t too thrilled with my GRE scores.
    One professor replied within minutes, with a brusque, one-sentence reply that she’s not taking students (she didn’t give a reason); that was extremely disconcerting given the fact that I took time to construct a well thought out email, and I stopped my program search for weeks after that.
    I can certainly talk to my MS advisor, but he found a new position at a more prestigious university where I will be very unlikely to be admitted into.

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  22. Hello Dr. Gill,

    Thank you for this amazing and insightful post. I’m about to send out mails to professors I’d like to work with, but, I don’t have any research experience. The work experience I have is in a totally different field and I graduated from the University 4years ago.

    Would this affect my application? How do I convince the professors I’m very interested in research? Plus, my CV would be full of unrelated work experience; how can I make this work?

    Please, I’d appreciate your response. Thank you.

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    1. I know a lot of students who successfully ended up in graduate school after many years doing other things. Many faculty actually prefer working with such students, because they’re often more mature and know what they want.

      If it’s been a few years and/or your undergraduate degree is different than where you’d like to end up, volunteering or taking some classes in the field you’re interested in can help. As far as convincing the professors you’re very interested in research, I would just tell them the truth. What excites you about your field? Why do you want this career? What about the last four years helped you understand your goals better? Yes, your CV will have some unrelated work experience. You can leave this off, since it’s not related to your discipline and won’t be involved in evaluating you. In your personal statements/emails, you can list the things you’ve done in the interim.

      It’s also worth thinking about how you can spin what you’ve been doing as being helpful for what you’d like to do. Have you worked with people? Have you had to demonstrate writing or quantitative skills? Have you worked in teams, or independently? Have you gotten to travel or worked in adverse conditions? Used interesting equipment? All of these can be useful skills –it’s all about framing the narrative.

      Good luck!

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  23. Hi Dr. Gill,
    Thank you for such a great article. Using your advice, I was able to get positive feedback from prospective professors I’ve emailed!
    I’ve also gotten a response from my top choice professor and things went well. After the intro email he stated that he’s looking for one or two grad students and asked about my ambitions and some future goals. Given my responses he said our research interests match up well and he’s looking forward to my application (due in January) and don’t hesitate to email with any questions. My question is should I email him periodically just so he doesn’t forget about our exchange? If so, what are some typical questions people should ask at this stage? I don’t want to come off too pushy but I wasn’t sure if you’re typically supposed to keep in contact up until the application deadline.

    Thank you!

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    1. Congrats on the positive encouragement! I think just quick updates when you’ve applied, etc. are fine at this stage, unless you have specific questions that will help you make a decision about where to go (e.g., “what is the funding like?”). It sounds like your top choice is excited, though, so just a “As a quick update, I’ve submitted my application, so I’ll let you know what I hear!” is fine. He’ll remember you!

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  24. Hello, Dr. Gill! I know this was posted a long time ago, but thank you so much for your very helpful and insightful article! I used your advice to craft my own inquiry emails, and am indebted to you for your help.

    I have sent 3 emails so far, and received my first reply – which I am very excited for! I plan on sending more over the next coming weeks. I wish I had started this process a bit earlier, but I hope it is still not too late to find a professor whose lab would be a good fit for me, and has room for me.

    I had two questions, the first of which is regarding the professor who replied to me. In his reply, he gave me a brief overview of his current research and said we could skype if I wanted to know more. I know I should treat this skype call like an informal interview, but I want to know what sort of questions I should ask. I have started coming up with some questions to ask directly about his research, but is there anything else I should ask? and will this call potentially be the start of him helping me through the application process? I feel a bit lost since I have been out of college for two years, and I am worried about what to write for my letter of purpose.

    My second question is regarding the professors who have not responded to my email. I have sent these emails 1 or 2 weeks ago. Should I send them another email politely asking if they received my last email? and if so, when should I send it?

    Thank you again for your helpful advice!

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    1. It shouldn’t be too late, especially since opportunities (e.g., grant-funded positions) can come up at any time of year.

      I would treat the Skype like a formal interview, in that you should be professional, but it’s also a good way for each of you to gauge if you’re a good fit. Think about questions that will help YOU make a decision about whether to work with this professor, and also if this is a good department/university for you. You should ask questions about funding — does it include summer stipends, benefits, TA-ships versus research assistantships? What about the culture of the lab — are there regular lab meetings? What’s the professor’s mentoring style? What opportunities are there for training or professional development (will you get to go to conferences?)? Will you have the opportunity to teach (if you want), or mentor undergrads? You can also ask about specific research being done in the lab that you might work on, so it doesn’t hurt to have some science questions prepared.

      If the fit is good, the professor will then encourage you to apply at that stage. They may be encouraging more than one student, so there typically aren’t promises made at this stage (though sometimes people will say “I’d like to offer you a funded position, once you apply and are accepted). Usually if a professor is willing to fund you, acceptance at the departmental/grad school level is a formality. Good luck!

      I would give two weeks minimum before you follow up, especially if it’s the beginning of the semester, or a holiday. After that, just a quick and polite response expressing your enthusiasm if they’re still interested is appropriate. If you don’t hear after that, I would just move on.

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  25. Dr. Gill,

    Thank you vey much for posting this article – it will definitely help me for the future (and is now bookmarked)!

    I am currently in my third year, graduating May 2020, and I really want to go to graduate school. For some background, I am studying environmental engineering right now, but I am looking for more of an environmental science/oceanography graduate study program.

    I was wondering if it is appropriate to reach out to just the graduate school (such as general inquiries/contact page) and say that I have an interest in these programs and was wondering what I can do as an undergraduate to prepare me for graduate school at their institution? Also, as a Junior in my undergrad, is there any one else typically on a campus (other than my advisor) I can reach out to help me through the process of applying to graduate school? And I am currently working in a lab for experience and am involved with several organizations at my school, but is there any other thing you like to see undergrads involved in while looking at graduate applications?

    Sorry for the long message and questions – I know you’re probably busy! – but I hope to hear back soon! Thanks!!

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    1. There’s not much point in reaching out to the graduate school, as requirements are so department/field-specific. You’d get much better advice if you research the pages of departments you’re interested in, and also see if there are blog posts that go into detail about how to prepare yourself (there are a lot of these out there!). You can also ask professors at your current institution — go to their office hours, talk to your academic advisor if you have one, etc.

      Generally, if you’re interested in environmental science and oceanography, I would advise you to take math (especially calculus), statistics, chemistry, and physics, as well as some earth and marine science classes. If math and chem aren’t your strong suit, don’t give up hope, as that’s not a deal-breaker, but it will make you more competitive. Also look into getting research experiences, which is good. For next summer, I would strongly urge you to try to find an REU in the fields that interest you — these can definitely give you an edge. Also, if you have an option to do a senior thesis, I recommend it. That’s about it — club leadership and other kinds of extracurriculars aren’t as important as the hands-on experiences.

      Good luck!

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  26. Thank you for such a helpful article, Dr. Gill! I am a current senior who is planning on taking a gap year before applying to grad school. I’d like to prepare as many of my materials during this year as possible so that I don’t have to spend as much time preparing next fall. I’ve already identified programs and potential PIs whose labs and research I’m interested in. Do you think it would be acceptable to reach out to these PIs expressing an interest in and asking questions on their research, even though I’m not applying this cycle? Or would it be better to wait until the summer?

    Thank you!

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  27. Thank you for this thorough post. As someone who feels daunted about the application process, this helps. One question I have — I’ve graduated almost five years ago with an undergrad degree in sociology. I’m looking to expand into the sociology of education by pursuing an MA program at my alma mater. I’ve been working in a seemingly unrelated field — public relations — and am looking to make a leap for many reasons I won’t delve into here. The MA program at my alma mater is competitive, and with my B CGPA, I wonder, from your perspective or experience, how are people with okay GPAs, but with work experience regarded by academics? Should I take a different approach in emailing the prof/ program coordinator I’m interested in? Is emailing plus requesting a face-to-face informational interview a good way to make a connection?

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    1. I wouldn’t ask for a face-to-face meeting. People will invite you for one, potentially, if the conversation progresses and the fit is good.

      Grades are just one part of the package. Prospective advisors or programs will tell you if that’s the sticking point. Maturity, passion, drive, and real-world experience are worth a lot, too.

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  28. Thank you for this thorough post. As someone who feels daunted about the application process, this helps. One question I have — I’ve graduated almost five years ago with an undergrad degree in sociology. I’m looking to expand into the sociology of education by pursuing an MA program at my alma mater. I’ve been working in a seemingly unrelated field — public relations — and am looking to make a leap for many reasons I won’t delve into here. The MA program at my alma mater is competitive, and with my B CGPA, I wonder, from your perspective or experience, how are people with okay GPAs, but with work experience regarded by academics? Should I take a different approach in emailing the prof/ program coordinator I’m interested in? Is emailing plus requesting a face-to-face informational interview a good way to make a connection?

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  29. Hi Dr. Gill,

    Thank you so much for the informative article.

    I edited my draft upon reading your article. I wish you could give me some feedback on the current draft:

    Dear Prof. [Professor Name],

    I am a fresh graduate of X University, with a major in X. My graduation project is titled “…”. I worked as an undergraduate research assistant in two research groups; at X, where I conducted a research on [simple illustration of my research] (published at X Journal), and at X, where we [illustration of research] (published at X). I very recently joined a research group at X University where we are currently carrying out extensive literature review for X. I have good experience with [tools related to the field].

    I read your paper titled “[paper title]” and I find your work on [topics the paper covered] really exciting.

    I am considering applying to the University of X and I’d like to inquire whether you are currently accepting graduate students. If not, do you recommend any other professors at the University of X with similar interests who will be accepting students? I know you’re very busy, I appreciate any time you can give me.

    and then I attached the CV.

    Thank you for your time, Dr. Gill 🙂

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    1. I like it! I’d recommend a few things: 1) If you can be a little more specific about what you liked about the paper and how it ties into your research interests, it will come across as more genuine. 2) I would take out the request for info about other professors. Some people will send you names, but it’s really your job to do this work, and phrases like that make me think you’re just taking a scattershot approach. I would also 3) take out “I am considering applying to the University of X,” but that may be field-specific. In my fields, you generally apply because you want to work with a faculty member, not because you want to be at that university, so again, this would come across as a form message to me.

      Good luck!

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      1. Thank you for your reply, I have a follow-up question though.

        I am applying for M.Sc. program, do professors expect M.Sc students to be involved in research and understand their papers? I find it really exhausting to read a full paper before emailing the professor. What I normally do is check the papers’ topics and if it goes along with my research interests, I send the professor an email. If I have to fully read a paper of the professors, do you recommend a most-cited one or a most-recent one?

        Many thanks!

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  30. Hi Dr. Gill, thank you so much for the informational post. I am currently sending out emails to potential mentors (in the clinical neuropsychology sect) and am feeling funny about what questions to include. After a brief summary of how my research interests match theirs, I have been able to ask most advisors if they’ll be accepting students, which has given my email a “point” per say, but I ran into a road block: one professor has already listed that they’re unsure and will update their website mid-September. I still want to get my name on their radar…do you have any recommendations about other questions I should include? Any advice would be greatly appreciated! Thank you!

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    1. I’m a big fan of keeping those inquiry emails brief. “I would love to discuss opportunities in your lab. Would you be interested?” Or “Are you currently accepting students? I would love to discuss opportunities.” is sufficient. You can always mention that you’re happy to look for funding opportunities. If a professor is unsure, they may be waiting to hear back from a grant, so just be respectful of that response and check back later. Then you can reply to the same email (unless I’m reading this wrong, you’ve already emailed them, right?) and continue the conversation. You don’t want to be too pushy here — that can come across as rude or like you don’t respect their time. Good luck!

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  31. Hello,

    Your blog helped me to form my email to a prospective supervisor for a graduate program. I am wondering how I can improve my email?

    Dear Dr. ______,

    My name is John ____ and I am currently a fourth year student attending the University of ________ in the forensic anthropology program. I will be graduating in June 2019 and I am wondering if you have graduate opportunities available next academic year. I became aware of your research and your contributions to the field of forensic anthropology, especially in human juvenile osteology in various forensic anthropology and osteology classes.

    Starting in September, I will be studying the effects of _____ movement and _____ on _____ and documenting the ______ for my forensic internship under the supervision of ______ of _____. The study is planned to be published in a scientific journal once it is completed. In graduate school, I would like to continue to study the___________ in different environments but I am open to other research questions.

    I have attached a copy of my CV for your consideration and would be interested in discussing possibilities with your lab.

    Yours Sincerely,

    John ______

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    1. Your draft looks great! One thing I would do is strengthen that connection to the prospective advisor early on. Instead of “I became aware of your research,” something closer to “I read your paper on…” or “I’ve been following your work on X, and I find it really exciting.” Make it a little more personal — it shouldn’t sound like you can just swap the titles out for another professor. Good luck!

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  32. Hi Dr. Gill,

    I would like to ask a question about CV writing as an undergrad applying for a Master’s program. I’ve read the section in your post on CV writing, visited the website you linked in the section (as well as other websites) to view examples of academic CVs, and came across the reply you gave on Dec. 6, 2017 regarding examples of appropriate sections to include in a CV but am still unsure about the following:

    1. I conducted research in undergrad as part of a senior honors thesis (an 8-month undergraduate course). As this form of research fits many of the sections mentioned in your CV comment (i.e. research experience, relevant coursework, presentation), I would like to verify which section would be most appropriate.

    I think that this experience would belong under “research experience,” but am also planning on including the “relevant courses” section for other courses. Should I list the undergrad research course under “relevant courses” or would this be too repetitive (since the course would have already been mentioned under “research experience”)?

    2. In relation to Q1, would the circumstance in which the research experience occurred affect the professor’s perception of the student’s application to their laboratory (e.g. volunteering in lab vs. co-op position vs. lab course)?

    Thank you for your consideration, and I look forward to your reply.

    Sincerely,
    Brendan

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    1. Undergrad research/senior thesis research would go under the research section, IMO.

      I wouldn’t call a lab course a research experience (that goes under coursework), but it’s still a place where you learned valuable skills, and it’s okay to speak to that. Whether paid or volunteer, a lab or field tech experience is a bit more in-depth, and your mentor can often speak better to your skills and personality. A thesis is the best, if you can do one, because it’s the closest analog to what grad school is like. But we understand that not everyone has access to those experiences.

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  33. Some excellent advice here. I emailed several prospective supervisors and they asked for my CV. However, I did not hear back from them after sending my CV? What should I do? Also, is it necessary to send a cover letter with the CV? Thanks.

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    1. Your introductory email takes the place of a cover letter in this case. I can’t comment specifically on why these professors did not email you back, because I don’t have the details, but it could be a few reasons: 1) You were not a good fit or match for their lab. 2) It’s summer and folks are busy and often away, especially during the holidays. 3) There may have been some issues with how you formatted your CV, or perhaps you don’t have the experience they are looking for.

      As a general rule, I tell students to give it a couple of weeks and then follow up with a polite, brief email, and if they don’t respond of that, just drop it and move on.

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  34. This is so helpful Dr. Gill.
    I am an engineering graduate in biotechnology wanting to pursue masters and PhD in the same. I am currently writing a review article and a research paper. Would you suggest mentioning this when I reach out to the professors?

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    1. Is it a peer-reviewed paper? I’d mention it for sure in that case, along the lines of, “I’ve completed a thesis on X, which I’m submitting soon to Journal Name.”

      If it’s an internal paper, mention the project and say you’re happy to share the research paper if they’re interested. Sometimes it’s nice to see a writing sample or research or stats skills, even if not published.

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      1. Thank you for replying Dr. Gill. Yes, I am actually targeting the peer-reviewed ones. But, I have a follow up question regarding this that if I cannot get it published by the deadlines or it remains an internal paper and the professor is not quite impressed with it will it hurt my chances at all?

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  35. Thanks for such an informative post.

    Will it hurt me to send a resume with my email to potential research advisors? Or should it definitely be a CV?

    Thanks.

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    1. I covered this in the post, and I encourage you to read the links. CV’s are the standard for academic positions. Resumes are too short, not informative enough, and send a message that you’re not doing your homework.

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  36. This is a great post. I wish I would have stumbled upon it months ago. I recently applied to Ph.D. programs, however, I made a grave mistake and did not send inquiry emails. The reason for this is that I had read online from others recommending not to email professors. I now realize my mistake in not sending emails early on. I did, however, research the professors I wanted to work with and made sure I made it clear in my Statement of Purpose of why I wanted to work with them. The earliest applications I did were in mid-December, while the most recent were just a few days ago. Would you recommend still sending them emails now, introducing myself and letting them know I’m a prospective student? Or would I just be hurting myself even more by highlighting the fact that I didn’t email before?

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    1. Having not read the advice you’re talking about, it’s tough to say. If the people giving you that advice are in your field (and it’s very different from mine) or if the departmental website says not to do it, then it might not be the standard for whatever departments you’re applying to. In my field, and in my department, we very rarely take students out of the general pool of applicants. It can never hurt to contact a prospective advisor, and when in doubt, ask one of your professors, your undergrad advisor, or the graduate coordinator in the department you’re applying to what the convention is.

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  37. Nice article Dr. Gill. I have already applied to the graduate programs. Will you suggest me how should I structure the email that I will send to my prospective faculty?
    Thanks
    Dipti

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    1. I don’t think you’d necessarily do anything differently than the example I gave, but you’ll always want to tailor your email appropriately. So in this case, a quick sentence up front that you’ve applied to the program but are interested in working with them would be sufficient.

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  38. Hello Dr. Gill,
    I am graduating in June of 2019 and I’m beginning to look into the grad school application process. I found your blog post to be really enlightening and helpful, thank you so much for taking the time to share advice! I am an English Literature major, so the process may be completely different, but I was wondering if there was a way for me to also contact professors that I’m interested in working with during the PhD process (without asking about a lab). Do you have any advice for an English major in the application process or how to contact professors before my application is considered? Is there is a way for me to reach out and express interest in their work? Do you think they might be able to put in a good word for me or is that mostly something that occurs the STEM fields?

    Thank you again for sharing your experiences and advice!

    Sincerely,
    Sierra A.

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  39. This is a fantastic post. Thank you Dr.Gill,
    I am currently in the process of applying for PhD positions and came across your post. I was wondering if you could tell me how much does the subject line of the email matter? Do some emails go to ‘bin’ just by reading the subject line. Any suggestions?
    Bhagyashree

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    1. I generally don’t delete based on subject. I delete emails that refer to me as “Dear Sir,” or which are for something I don’t do (e.g., engineering). But generally, a subject should read something like “prospective graduate student inquiry” or “inquiring about research opportunities” or something general like that.

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  40. Hi, Dr. Gill,
    I contacted with a professor of my field of interest and she encouraged me to apply and suggested me to put her name in my SOP. I did so and didn’t put any other professor’s name in the SOP. After, submitting my application I emailed her giving my application ID and requested her to have a look at my application. But, I don’t get any response from her. What should I do?

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    1. I’m not sure what SOP stands for — statement of purpose? You should only mention specific professors that you’ve contacted and have had a positive discussion with. Professors will generally be contacted to review your materials as part of the departmental approval process. There are generally application reviews by the graduate school, and also the department. It’s not typical to request review from a professor — they’ll be looking at them anyway. You can tell them you’ve applied and thank them for their support, which is fine. Otherwise, you just have to wait, because there are still a couple of steps your application has to go through before a potential advisor is even consulted. Good luck!

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  41. I’m really stuck on this whole CV portion, I don’t think I have done enough in academia, (Bachelors 2014, Masters in progress) to warrant the creation of a CV. I have done some research in undergrad, but didn’t publish; and in my masters, I’m not able to perform a thesis project. I’ve identified a potential PhD program, but haven’t reached out as of yet.I’ve certainly identified my research ideas and projects I’d like to work on. Any thoughts?

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    1. A CV can look different at different stages of your career. A Masters student can certainly create a CV — you’d have sections for: 1) Professional Preparation (your education), 2) Research experience (it’s okay if unplublished — list your projects), 3) Funding (if any, even travel grants, etc.), 4) Relevant Coursework (you wouldn’t include this later, but it’s fine now), 5) Skills (including programming, languages, etc.), 6) Publications if any, 7) Presentations if any, 8) Service (have you served on committees? Volunteered?), 9) Professional Affiliations (are you a member of any academic societies?

      I see many CVs by undergraduates. There’s no expectation that your CV looks like someone with a PhD twenty years out — it’s meant to be a living document that you add to through time. Look up some examples. You can absolutely write a CV at this stage, it’s just going to look differently from mine.

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  42. Dear Dr. Gill,

    Thank you for the article, I am wondering about the optimal number, if any, PhD programmes one may want to focus on and apply for. I am asking this because every PhD application requires time and resources from the planning stage to the actual final application submission. I did make a list of the top 5 universities which best suits to my knowledge, skills and interests, however it may seem to be too much.

    All the best,
    Roland

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    1. This is a really good question. The answer is tricky, and is really something like “the optimal number of programs to apply to is the number that get you into grad school.” I know that’s not helpful! But it really comes down to how much time you’re putting into cultivating those relationships with prospective advisors, if that is the norm for your field. As a general rule, I counsel people to focus on a smaller number of applications and putting more time and effort into those, rather than sending out lots and lots of weaker applications. This is because, not only will you do better if you put more time into your applications, but as you point out, they are costly in terms of time and money. I generally see people who are successful who start off with a long list of candidates, say around 8 to 12, and then winnow down based on their research and responses they get to initial emails. In an ideal situation, you will have at least 2 to 3 offers to consider and compare. In my case, I had a firm commitment of funding from my top choice, so I only submitted one application in the end, though I pursued several labs in the beginning.

      Good luck!

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      1. Dear Dr. Gill,

        I am wondering what should I do in those situations when I approached a potential PhD supervisor and I received a positive response by email (more than 10 cases so far), but the approached expert does not want to discuss my PhD topic and proposal any further until the final board decision has been made regarding my formal application to a PhD program? In what way can I know that I will be able to work with my supervisor in the next 3+ years and he/she will support me during my journey towards academia (e.g. publishing papers, participating in workshops and conferences) if they do not give the chance to exchange thoughts before I accept the offer for a PhD program?

        Best regards,
        Roland

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        1. I’m not really sure what’s going on in this case — it may be that you’re in a field that’s really different from mine, culturally. I don’t typically even consider a student without knowing our research interests are a good match. If you’re in microbiology, chemistry, or some other field where you might do a rotation, or would be on a funded project without a lot of flexibility, then it doesn’t make a lot of sense to put the cart before the horse.

          It may be that people are being polite and encouraging you to apply as a way to “reject” you in a passive aggressive way, but that doesn’t sound like it would be that common. It may be that in your field, or the types of institutions you’re applying to (outside the US?) that advisors don’t want to put the time in before they know you’re competitive. In my case, an advisor wanting to work with you can be one of the biggest deciding factors in your being accepted.

          If none of the above is true, and people are just blowing you off, that may be a sign that you should be looking to work with different kinds of people. It may be a red flag that these folks aren’t a good fit and won’t be very supportive. Or, there may be something wrong with your approach — are things breaking down during the communication process at some point? Are you being too pushy? Again, >10 instances of this seems really odd to me.

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  43. Thank you for the informative post!

    Would you happen to have any advice on how to address a non-traditional career/school path in a letter to a potential mentor? My undergraduate degree is in biology, but my career took a bit of a detour into academic librarianship for a number of years. I’d like to return to biology, but I’m finding myself at a loss as to how to address my strange career path.

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    1. Honestly? Just be open and tell the truth. This is the narrative of your life. Why did you go into academic librarianship? Was it really a detour? Or was it an important step in learning about data literacy and information science? Did you find yourself more interested in the topic than the work itself in the end? What inspired you to go back to biology? Your personal experiences? Lack of feeling challenged? There are lots of ways to spin a career trajectory — the important thing is to convince me as a potential advisor that working with me is the next logical step on your path. Many advisors really like working with people like you — intellectually mature, you know what you want, you won’t take grad school for granted. This can be a strength, not a weakness. Good luck!

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    1. I usually give at least two weeks before I send a follow up, especially in summer. Many academics aren’t paid in summer, or are at conferences or in the field, so may be away from email. A follow-up would generally be something like, “Dear Dr. X, I wanted to send a quick follow up, in case you’ve been away from your desk or missed my earlier message. I’m still excited to discuss opportunities with your lab. Best wishes, X.”

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  44. Dr. Gill,
    Thank you for taking your time to share this extremely helpful advice. I am about a year and a half out of undergrad (graduated May 2016), so I am a bit rusty when it comes to writing professors emails. I would like to ask you a few questions.

    ~Do professors look more at undergrad research than post-grad job experience in the field you’re looking to research? I never worked in a lab while I was an undergrad or wrote a senior thesis, I did however intern with the Forest Service and have been working for the US Fish and Wildlife as a Fisheries Technician ever since graduation, but I am afraid not having any lab experience will hurt my chances of pursuing a masters degree.
    Do you have any suggestions on how to “market” my experience to make it more relevant to research?

    ~I am a bit confused at the process of pursuing a masters. Is the order to email an inquiry before applying to a graduate degree? Or should you apply first and then inquire about a graduate advisor?

    Thank you!
    Geena

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    1. Great questions! I think professors will look at the whole package, and more recent experience is weighted more heavily. So, the fact that you worked for the Forest Service is and USFW is great (if you’re interested in doing something related to field ecology and not, say, physics). Lab experience is not as big an issue in that case. If you’d been working in a retail job and didn’t have any lab experience, that might be tough. If you’ve worked in the field but not in a lab setting, but wanted to go into molecular work, you might say something about how your field internships helped you realized that what you really wanted to understand was how organisms operate at the cellular level. Try to tie in what you’ve done with what you’d like to do — show the progression of your ideas. Always spin things in a positive way when you can!

      As far as when to email, I suggest (for ecology programs) that you make contacts with prospective labs first. Applying without a contact won’t always work if you don’t have someone you’ve made contact with. Here at my department at UMaine, students who apply to the general pool rarely get accepted. Usually, we’re working with students during the application process, and if nobody is interested in working with a student, we don’t accept them. Plus, applying costs money and time, so you want to minimize the number of applications you submit if they’re not going to be successful.

      This practice varies by field, though! For example, it’s common in some chemistry or molecular biology departments to apply to a program, then do a rotation among labs and then pick an advisor. So talk to people in your field to find out what’s customary. And when in doubt, talk to the graduate coordinator for the program you’re considering and ask what their culture is. Good luck!

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      1. Dr. Gill,

        I appreciate your response so much! It is extremely helpful to have some guidance in this process that is quite foreign to me. Thank you again!

        Geena

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  45. Thank you for sharing this helpful information. I would like to know whether it is inadvisable to mail more than one professor from the same department if I am interested in both their research interests.

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  46. Thank you so much for this post, it has been so helpful in formulating my e-mails to potential advisors! I do have a question related to choosing writing samples. A few professors on their websites ask for samples, and I am having trouble deciding what to send. As an undergrad I worked in a lab studying the evolution of poison dart frogs, and I am now applying to forest ecology/forest hydrology labs. My honors thesis (on the frogs) is probably my most polished piece of work, having gone through many edits and having been seen by many different eyes, but it is not at all related to the research in these labs I am interested in. Should I go with less polished, but more relevant, samples, or the thesis? Thanks again!

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    1. Generally, faculty who ask for writing samples are looking to gauge your writing skills more than your expertise. So, send them your best work, and then feel free to mention you’ve got other work you could also send upon request, if they want something more topical.

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  47. Hi Dr. Jacquelyn Gill,

    Thank for your article it really helped me a lot to make my cover letter I am graduate from india who want to pursue master’s in canada but while sending to to one of the professor I committed a mistake i.e I sent wrong curriculum vitae to send it was not acamedic CV so should I send another email apologiezing with updated or let the error go as it is.

    Thank you.

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    1. I’m a little unclear — did you send a resume instead of a CV? Or a CV formatted for a different type of position? If so, just a quick “apologies, please look at this instead” is totally okay. But if both provide the same relevant information, don’t worry about it.

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  48. Thanks for the informative article. I was wondering if I could have some advice. I am currently looking to attend graduate school for fish and wildlife biology. My undergraduate experience is in political science though. I am currently working on research on a fish population but other than that, my work is biology is limited. How can I present that information to a potential advisor?

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    1. I think you do it just as you did it here, for me. You outline your background, why you’re interested in shifting to a new field, and the experiences you’re gaining to help you do that. You may end up being asked to take some math or science classes to help you prepare, but for your inquiry email, keep it brief and make the personal connection with fish and wildlife biology.

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  49. Hello! Thank you so much for this! It is so hard to find content like this. As someone who has very few biologists waiting around for me to ask them questions, this is so appreciated. I was wondering, how early should one send their inquiry email? I am planning on applying this coming fall to grad school (for the fall of 2018). I have no idea when is the right time. Any thoughts?

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  50. Thank you! Your post was a good way for me to start writing emails. I emailed about 40 profs all over canada a couple of months back asking for an internship towards my final year undergrad project. None of them had openings for an international student.
    Now, I have to apply for masters soon and I have to secure a supervisor for that. I will be emailing the same professors again. Is it fine if I contact more than one prof from the same department with a similar email template? I really need to get through this time.

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    1. Be careful coming across as using a spam-like approach. I’d email them and say “you may recall that I inquired about an internship opportunity in your lab. I am still excited about the research in your lab, and am now looking into graduate opportunities…”

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  51. Thank you for this post! I’m using it as a model to inquire into graduate opportunities at a university in australia i previously studied abroad at.

    Do you think this is acceptable? [redacted for privacy] (the faculty member im emailing researches dolphin abundance/distribution)

    —–My name is [name], I am a senior undergraduate student at the [school]. I was looking into several of your recent publications listed on the [school] research portfolio, in particular
    [publication name]. Personally, I thought it was a brilliant way to utilise local resources while obtaining valuable data, and I am very interested in your work. I am currently working on an Honours Thesis through my university researching the efficiency of chemical cleaning and catalyst-based acidification for stable isotope analysis of oyster shells. Although not directly linked by this project, I do have lab training and experience in capture/recapture and other distribution and abundance surveying techniques. My long term goal is to teach about and research marine mammals and larger vertebrates. As such, I was wondering if you will be looking for a graduate student next year? I complete a B.S. in [degree] this December, and would be ideally starting a Masters in Study Period 1 of 2018. I am attaching my CV for your perusal.

    Thank you for your time, and I hope to hear from you soon!—–

    I don’t want to be over the top but I am dying to get in with her.

    Cheers, Kelley

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    1. I’m sorry I missed this when you posted originally! I would just say you were reading the paper (no need to say you found it on the university website). I might avoid “brilliant,” since that sounds like flattery — maybe “exciting”? I’d also avoid saying “Although not directly linked” (that goes without saying) — just focus on the positive: “which has been a great way to learn these techniques, and I discovered I really loved field/lab science” (you get the idea).

      I hope that helps!

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  52. Thanks you so much for this post, it’s what i was looking for . I am extremely interested in pursuing my PhD degree overseas, I would greatly appreciate it if you kindly give me some feedback on the following inquiry email:

    Dear Dr XXX,
    I am a master graduate in mechanical and process engineering with a strong background in applied mechanics and finite element modeling. I am highly interested to join the PhD programme at XXX university for Fall 2017. In this regard, I wonder if you could supervise me for the PhD degree in the research area of machinability of advanced materials. My experience and skills are certainly within your research interests and activities of your research group. Please find attached, my CV and my conference paper. Thanks in advance for the help. I look forward to hearing from you.

    Kind regards,
    younes

    Thanks, Dr. Jacquelyn Gill.

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    1. So, if you look at your message, you do a few things that I suggest you to avoid, First, don’t ask if someone can supervise you. The inquiry email should be worded less strongly (“I was wondering if you’d be available to discuss opportunities in your lab?”). Secondly, I didn’t learn anything specific about your research interests — what questions do you want to pursue? Do you have a particular project in mind? This email reads like it could be a form letter sent to dozens of people — that’s what you want to avoid. Try to tailor it to the specific advisor, and get them excited by referring to a specific idea or project that’s in line with their work.

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    2. Dr. Gill,

      Thank you for the article, I took your advice and landed an interview with my program of choice! However, I have been waiting to hear back for about 6 weeks and would like your advice on how/when I should initiate a follow up with the professor. I would like to ask if she has made a decision, but I obviously don’t want to be pushy. Should I continue waiting or engage? She was waiting on a grant proposal for the position I was applying, so I thought I could word it in a way that merely asks if she has heard back about the grant. I am being told by students at the school that the deadline for hiring grad students for the fall semester is mid-April. Any advice would be appreciated! Thank you.

      Ryan

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      1. Congrats on the interview! I would definitely follow up and say something like, “I wanted to thank you again for the opportunity to discuss possibilities with your lab. I was wondering if you had heard back on the grant yet, or if you had a timeline for making a decision? I’m also happy to consider teaching assistantships or to apply for other available funding.”

        I think the mid-April deadline you’re referring to is the April 15th deadline. That’s a commitment by most schools not to pressure students to make a decision until then– that way people who have multiple offers who might be waiting to hear about funding decisions have a chance to consider all offers. In other words, most places won’t ask you for an acceptance until then.

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  53. This post is exactly what I was looking for! you absolutely answer all of our questions. I have been facing an issue that most professors whom I emailed have told me their labs are full for the year (almost feels that the department has no open position). How to deal with that? I am also tailoring an email to this amazing professor (who is also a surgeon) , his work is exactly what I want to do as a future scientist. I am really scared that he either rejects me due to space restriction or because of my low GPA ( I have ADHD which affected my capacity to stay focused during studying sessions sadly). But your post gave me some more insights on writing a brief/positive inquiry !

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    1. The best way around this is to try to contact people as early as possible — ideally in the summer before you applications are due (I’ve even had some people contact me a year in advance). Summer can be tough, so don’t be afraid to follow up. Early fall is the latest you really want to be reaching out.

      GPA is only a small part of what they look for. I overlook a lackluster GPA if the student has good letters of recommendation (so cultivate those!), research experience, and shows enthusiasm and intellectual maturity.

      Good luck!

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  54. Thank you so much for writing this article! It is exactly what I was looking for. Unfortunately for me, I read it a few hours too late. I just wrote to a two professors for my dream graduate program. Most of the programs I have applied to are in the biological sciences, which have rotations in the first year and do not require applicants to contact faculty. Now I am applying to an ecology program and it’s really different! I didn’t realize that the inquiry emails were so important! I’m so nervous… I really, really want to get into this program. I feel like it’s perfect for me. I now realize that my emails were way too long (about three paragraphs) and included a little bits of my life story. I thought I was doing a good thing by including additional information about myself! I attended a small undergraduate institution, and I guess I didn’t realize how busy PhD advisors are. I also didn’t know that proposing new research ideas was appropriate. I thought you just had to find a professor who is doing what you want to do and work on a project they have for you. I did read some of their papers, but I neglected to mention that because I thought it was such an obvious thing that anyone would do before applying, so it wasn’t worth mentioning. Wow, I feel like an idiot! At least I have a few more professors to email so I can learn from my mistakes! One of the Profs actually just replied and wants to talk with me so that’s exciting! I’ll take her graciousness as a good sign 🙂 Dr. Gill, would you be able to give me some advice on how to prepare for talking to this professor? I’ll be sure to think of ideas for new research projects and familiarize myself with recent publications. What is a prospective mentor looking for when they Skype an applicant? Will it be her interviewing me? What do they want to know?
    I have to say, you are doing an amazing thing my sharing your insight and expertise with all of us. I admire your dedication to the readers here. Thanks for replying to our comments, even though you have no obligation to do so. It is clear that many people’s graduate careers were made possible your timely advice!

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    1. I’m glad you’re getting responses! I want to clarify — there’s no one single best way to go about this (though there are lots of wrong ways!), but there are ways that will maximize the likelihood of getting a response. It sounds like you’re doing something right if people are responding, so just be yourself and don’t stress too much about this processes. Focus on keeping your interactions courteous and professional — that goes a long way.

      As far as a Skype meeting, this is both an informal interview, but it’s also an opportunity to get to know the professor and lab a bit more. This will be an important relationship, so conversations can reveal if you’re a good fit for each other (this goes both ways!). Make sure that you have a list of questions — how is the lab run? What is the professor’s mentoring style? What is the funding like? Are there possibilities to develop your own project? These are important questions for you, too. Your professor will be getting a sense of your intellectual maturity, your strengths and weaknesses, and whether you’ll be a good personality fit (I cannot stress this enough — your relationship with your advisor can make or break graduate school, so pay attention to your gut!). This will likely involve questions about your interests, long-term goals, research experience, even strengths and weaknesses. Think of it as half interview, half conversation. To use a terrible metaphor, it’s a bit like a date. Do you have compatible interests? Can you work well together?

      Good luck! And thank you for the kind words about my blog!

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  55. Thanks for the great advice. I do have a quick question. I reached out to a potential advisor and she did get back to me explaining how she is planning on taking on a graduate student and requested my transcripts and CV. I sent them about a week ago. Should I send her a follow up email?

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    1. Without seeing the full email exchange it’s difficult to say, but if she didn’t give you any response (“Thanks, got it, will be in touch”) at this stage it’s okay to ask if it would be possible to schedule a phone call or Skype to talk about opportunities.

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  56. Wow, I came to this article hoping to find some solution to the problems I’m currently facing and I find that I’ve done literally nearly everything in this article. Maybe I’m going about it the wrong way but here’s my issue.

    I’m a biology student applying to programs in ecology and evolution. And my biggest issues are I can’t get anyone to call or email me back!! And I’m running out of time for deadlines! I work full-time and have little time on weekends and late afternoons to tackle emails, background research, GRE studying, meeting setups with potential contacts, etc. I have my GRe scores ready but want to take it again. I’m also working on 3 different personal statements tailored to three distinct programs, one in ecology/evolution, one in agricultural biology, and one in microbiology.

    I’ve formed multiple connections through internships and my undergraduate faculty and they’ve given me names of Admissions directors and faculty to contact. I’ve also done my HW on several professors at 6 different schools and have tailored each email almost eerily similar to how your example was set up. The only people that have e-mailed me back are department advisors who simply give me the names of faculty who I may be interested in working with who don’t email or call back. At this point I’m ready to ask these advisors to simply contact those professors & people for me!!
    I’m going to end up applying to these programs and not getting in because nobody would try to form a relationship with me. I’m even a little upset at those who do have an intimate relationship with me don’t go out of their way to contact somebody for me.

    I feel I’m literally doing this on my own and all of my network contacts are just handing me more names and contacts that lead to dead ends.

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    1. I’m sorry this has been a frustrating process. Having not seen your contact emails, it’s hard to assess what’s going wrong here, but from your comment there are a couple of possibilities.

      First, your interests sound like they’re all over the place. Is this coming through in your inquiry email? Do you have the background that would make you a good fit for the people you’re reaching out to?

      It’s not typical to contact admissions directors in our field until you’ve made connections with faculty and are in the process of applying, so you should really be focusing on finding a potential advisor first. Don’t ask departmental advisors to contact faculty for you — that’s not appropriate. It’s also not anyone’s job to necessarily be making these connections for you at this stage — your mentors should write you letters of recommendation and be a reference, but it’s important that this come from you.

      I’d have to see your inquiry email to assess what’s going wrong. But if you’re reaching out to a lot of people and not hearing anything back, my guess is you’re reaching out to the wrong people (poor fit; I usually don’t respond to emails that look like they’ve been sent to 100 other faculty), or there’s something wrong with your approach that you may not be aware of. Have any of your mentors looked over your email draft first?

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      1. Hi, I know this is almost a year late. But i wanted to thank you for responding to my comment last November. little tips go a long way. I definitely was tailoring each inquiry to the mutual interests of my potential advisors and myself despite me having several interests. So it must have just been a string of bad luck that NOBODY was getting back to me. I just wanted to share my experience of finally getting in somewhere.

        I got into Southern Illinois University’s Zoology and Wildlife department where I will be studying physiological ecology of endothermic mammals, I just started my first semester. The ONE advisor that was interested in having me emailed me back asking me to come up with a list of projects i could do in his lab (perhaps as a test?) cause he wasn’t actively looking for a grad student nor did he have any on going projects but would take one in if he or she was creative enough. Talk about on the spot pressure! I miraculously must’ve impressed him enough to get accepted! Currently I have no project set up so I’m working hard to learn his lab and put together a thesis project. My interests are still very broad, well, not that broad, i love ecology, conservation, and dealing with anthropogenic stressors but I think (I hope) grad school can help me to centralize a passion. Do you think this can happen or should I already have figured out what I wanted to do?

        Anyway, thank you for your advice!

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  57. Oh man, I’m grateful for seeing this. Grad school applications for my program of interest are due February 1, 2016 and I only decided I wanted to do a Masters 2 weeks! I am just right now looking at potential supervisors and jfelt completely confused and behind, but reading this was a bit of a relief.

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  58. Hello! This was a great article and I used it to help craft e-mails I sent to potential advisors earlier this fall. I got multiple responses and skyped with three professors. The talks went well and it was understood that I would be applying. I’m now working on the applications and was wondering if that was enough contact or if I should be e-mailing them throughout the process or once I’ve completed the applications? Thank you!

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    1. Generally, if you get a supportive response you continue the conversation throughout the process, and it’s also good to give them updates. But once everything is sent in, you’ll generally wait until you hear something — it’s outside the hands of the advisor at that point, but it’s a good idea to let them know where you are in the process.

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  59. Hello Dr Gill. Thanks for this instructive post. I stumbled upon it while googling for how to go about sending the inquiry email. I incorporated most of your advice in the email but I didn’t get a response initially. So, I sent a follow-up email two weeks after, to which the Professor replied. He told me to please resend the email to him after November 15. Am curious, does his response give any indication about my chance?

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    1. When are your applications due? I’m only just starting to read up on research interests of profs in my programs of interest.

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  60. Hi! I recently emailed a professor at a dream graduate school (I followed your tips, thank you!) and got a quick response back. He said that he can talk to me about the graduate program over Skype- does this mean that I can ask him if I can do research under him? I’m assuming this isn’t an interview because we’ll just be talking about the program that I’m interested in, but how can I make myself memorable? Thank you so much for your help!

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    1. I would treat this like an interview, but it’s also an opportunity for YOU to ask questions about the program and university, and to get a better sense of what the research options are. Good luck!

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  61. Greetings,
    Thank you for the detailed article on writing an inquiry mail. I’m an aspirant for MS in Canada. Recently, I started networking with potential supervisors. Few reverted back with stating no position available but many yet to reply and it’s been a week. Should I follow-up with them again? I was mailing them with a body content of 634 words wherein mentioning my work experience, projects and training underwent and awards. Do all these data are necessary? or Should I need to make my mail crisp enough? Your discerning comments will help me in getting my admission.
    Thank you.

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    1. Professors are busy, so brevity is ALWAYS good. Attach a CV rather than an extensive narrative. Your email sounds short enough not to be a negative, though. This is a very busy time, so don’t give up. Give it two weeks and then check in with a polite follow-up. Good luck!

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  62. Thank you Dr. Gill for writing this, as someone at this stage in the process it’s extremely informative and helpful. I am wondering, my research lab provided is with a guide in which those who have already been accepted into grad school provide some helpful information on applying. At their advice, I sent an inquiry email to a professor, but it did not include my personal research plans, only which aspects of her research I am interested in. She responded warmly and quickly, but now I am a little worried I may have missed my opportunity to include that extra information. I do not want to appear too overbearing, would it be too much to send a follow up email explaining my research goals, or cut my losses and hope my email displayed enough interest. Thank you, any advice is very appreciated!

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    1. I think you’re okay at this point — the follow-up discussions can be a good time to express your own aspirations, and there are always opportunities to have those discussions once you’re in the lab. I’d try to organize a visit if you can, or have a follow-up conversation where you talk explicitly about research ideas.

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  63. Hi Dr. Gill,
    Your post was really helpful! In fact, I contacted a potential PhD supervisor and now she wants to have a Skype session. As I have the international student status, I don’t know what to expect from this conversation. Is that a good sign? Or does she want to know only if my research topics are relevant to the programme?
    Many thanks!

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    1. Congrats on the Skype session! That’s a good sign — it’s basically an interview. She’ll likely want to feel out your personality (because fit is important), get a sense of your intellectual maturity, and discuss ideas. It’s also an opportunity for you to ask questions, so make sure you have some (about the program, etc.). Dress professionally, and treat it like an interview. Good luck!

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    2. I love your blog so much! I know this page is older, so I hope I reach you. I have recently been going through the process of applying to grad school for my PhD. I have been in contact with a faculty member, and I am VERY interested in working with her. She recently emailed me this statement… “Your interests seem to align well with mine. But know that I am speaking with a number of prospective students now.” It followed a sentence about going ahead with my application. I am unsure of what to say/do. Should I ask around at other labs/with other faculty or just hope that I will have a spot in her lab?? Thank you!

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      1. Thanks! I appreciate the kind words.

        You should always diversity your applications, especially without a strong commitment. It sounds like she’s being open and honest with you. Those other students may make other choices, or you may end up on a wait list, so it’s a good idea to have a backup plan or three. In the meantime, I’d keep the conversation going with her if you can — ask if you can set up a visit!

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    1. This is not uncommon. In this case, first do some research into the availability of teaching assistantships and fellowships you can apply for, then ask if he’d be willing to work with you if you can secure your own funding (and cite specific examples of things you found in your research). I’d also avoid using phrases like “please reply asap” in your email to him. 😉

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        1. You shouldn’t go to grad school without funding, period. Most professors won’t take you if you’re not funded one way or another — otherwise, you’d have to take out costly student loans, and would have no way to pay for your living expenses. Make sure you look for lots of options, including people posting advertisements for students on list-servs for the societies relevant to your field.

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          1. Hi!!
            Actually I got an automatic reply from prof. that “he is away from lab and he will look forward to reply mail. if urgent you can resend it another day”.I sent mail to him.but even after five days i didn’t get any reply.should i take it no from her side?

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      1. Thank you for this great mentoring. I contacted a potential supervisor and he replied with;
        “Thank you for your inquiry. We are always looking for well qualified graduate students, and I encourage you to apply.
        Please keep me informed of your application status, and I will make sure i review your file with your interests in mind.

        Please let me know if you have any questions or concerns as you complete the application process.

        Best regards,”

        Is this enough green light that he can take me?
        How do i reply to this and keep the relationship strong?
        Thanks for your time.
        Israel

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        1. This is a green light that he’s interested, but not committing yet. There are likely other people that he’s also considering. Definitely do what you can to keep on the radar — if you have an idea for a project, or for funding, you can follow up with something like that. But don’t bombard him with emails. Do your best to make sure your application is strong. Feel free to email him if you come across an interesting paper, for example, and say “I read this and thought of a project,” or “I found this fellowship and would like to apply.” You could also ask if it would be possible to arrange a campus visit or a Skype session.

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  64. The article and all the comments were really informative. However, I have a question. While looking forward for PhD, sometimes we don’t have a strong research or publications (just an independent work of dissertation on some topic is the most we have done, and that as a part of graduate coursework). It is more often because of the lack of proper funding or the well equipped laboratories especially in developing countries. There is a desire to study further and explore and delve more of the research areas, but because of lacking of practical exposure one can’t exactly make up his specific area of interest and can’t precisely generate the field where he would want to explore more (because you know there are wide areas that could be explored as biomedical science is itself interdisciplinary & multidisciplinary, and on top of that when you don’t have chance to explore more of the areas each and every areas of researches would be fascinating…be that genomic researches, proteomic analysis, works on cancer related researches, microorganism or animal models for genetic modifications, works on vaccine production or any other molecular level researches). So, in such a case when we look for potential advisors, most of the faculty’s work would fascinate us and they definitely have different topics to work on. Now my query is how would we find out specific potential advisors? And can we approach all the faculty of a department or all faculties of 2-3 different but interrelated departments of the same university? If yes, while approaching the faculties of the same department, should we approach the same way to all building up our interest on one particular topic…or can we approach individual mentors differently making up our interest as per their research areas??
    And how would each way of these approaches affect the way professor looks after us and our genuinty??
    This is actually a very important concern, at least for me, because most of the time we have a very strong desire to get an opportunity but are helpless due to different factors.

    P.S. I am sorry if I could not present the query effectively, but I hope you would atleast get what I mean to ask.

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    1. I think most students who apply for PhD programs don’t have publications under their belt, and that’s okay! The best ways to find out who you’d like to work with is 1) read, read, read, and 2) talk to your mentors. Sign up for email alters for journal articles, or go to your library and browse recent publications, or do a Google Scholar search on the topics you’re interested in, and see who is doing work you find exciting. If you’re still having trouble, your professors and advisor should have some suggestions, too.

      I would urge you not to email everyone in a department, unless it’s a field with a culture where you don’t need to know your advisor to apply (e.g., common in chemistry). The last thing you want to do is come across as spamming — I ignore a lot of emails from students who have nothing in common with me and show no specific interest in my work, but are clearly sending hundreds of emails to faculty in the hopes someone will respond. Your absolute best bet is to do your homework, research faculty you’re interested in, and approach them individually and respectfully. If you’re contacting multiple people at the same department, as a courtesy, let each faculty member know that (e.g., “I am also reaching out to Profs. X and Y.”).

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  65. Thank you, this is super-helpful, as I am trying to navigate this particular minefield…

    I was wondering if you have any advice on what the policy/good form/polite thing to do is if – having crafted an inquiry letter to the best of ones abilities, with relevant interests, academic rigour and all – there is no response? I’m looking at UK institutions, which specifically state that contacting potential supervisors in advance is crucial. So, if there’s no response, either after a first inquiry or after a request for a proposal/cv, is it ok to send a follow up email (after a week? A month?) Or contact someone else in the same program? Apply through the formal process anyway (as one would, I think, in the USA)?

    What I mean, I suppose, is if this semi-informal initial back-and-forth simply fails to take off or fizzles out, is the only thing to do just forget about applying to the entire department/institution?

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    1. It’s sadly not uncommon to not give a response, and I’ve been guilty of this too. Sometimes email ends up in spam, sometimes we’re swamped and it falls off our radar, and sometimes it’s a passive aggressive way of ending the correspondence. It’s hard to know which!

      If you send an initial response and get no answer, feel free to send a follow-up in a couple of weeks (especially if you emailed over the summer or the beginning of the semester). If you’ve had a back-and-forth and there’s been a sudden radio silence on the other end, it’s also okay to follow up in a week or two (I generally give at least a week). But if someone seems very slow to respond in general and a bit flaky, consider that as a possible sign that they may not be a good advisor! If you do decide to follow up with someone else in that department after a conversation fizzles, a courtesy email to the first person is appropriate. You can also send a message saying “Thanks so much for your time. I just wanted to give you a quick update about my graduate applications — I’m also reaching out to X and Y, but I’m still very interested in pursuing opportunities with your lab.” Good luck!

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  66. Thanks for this write up, Dr. Gill. I am applying to graduate school after working in a field I thought I would enjoy, but have discovered it is not for me. I did not do fantastic in undergraduate school, but a large reason was a major illness to a close family member. My CV will not be very strong in my academia or relevant lab experience – I worked in a Chemistry lab, but am applying to Biology graduate school (with similar interest to yours), but I am currently participating in an Ecology internship. My question is how to go about asking for advice without a super strong CV. I think what makes me such a qualified candidate for graduate school is the path I choose after undergraduate (spent 7 months hiking across country living with and observing wildlife, working on fishing vessel absorbing as much as possible about marine ecosystems, etc). Are those things acceptable to put on a CV, and would you send such things to a potential advisor? I was also wondering about timing – the fall semester is just getting started, and I was wanting to ask for advice on taking a few classes in the graduate college as a non-degree seeking student (because it doesn’t appear you can apply for a degree seeking position in the spring). Is that an acceptable questions to ask in the inquiry email – would he/she suggest classes to take in the Spring semester? Thank you for any help you can provide – doing poorly in undergraduate has kept me out of graduate school, but I know with a renewed focus and drive I can certainly prove myself as a strong graduate student.

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    1. You can absolutely put any and all relevant work on your CV (even if not academic). I’d also not worry too much about switching fields — I know people who have gone from music to biology! Your cover letter can absolutely (briefly) get into your background and any gaps or issues with your GPA, etc. If you can take some community college classes in the meantime to show that you can do better under better circumstances, that’s also good. And any and all field or lab work you can do will also help, because letters can go a long way to improve your chances with a rough transcript.

      Some departments do accept people in the spring, so don’t rule that out! But you’ll probably be stronger if you take this year to apply, get some field experience (even volunteering), and taking some classes.

      Also, chemistry can be REALLy helpful to a graduate career in ecology. Stable isotope analysis, stoichiometry, physiology, and other disciplines all benefit from a chemistry background. If you’d rather leave that behind, that’s okay, too — just emphasize what you learned as a chemistry major (careful lab work, processes fundamental to life, etc.), spinning the transition as a positive (“during y studies, I realized that my real passion was in…” — and try to use a concrete example, like “while I was in my X class, I found myself wondering more about how global warming would affect the rates of X in Y, than the actual chemical reactions themselves.” You get the idea. It’s all about framing — take your personal narrative and spin it in a way that shows that grad school in ecology is the natural next step, and that the trials you’ve overcome will make you a stronger student and scientist.

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  67. Awesome post. I have just started exploring options for my post-grad studies, after two years of working odd engineering jobs. While I definitely want to answer the big questions of how the snails use their shells (or in my case, how water causes erosion), I am not very enthusiastic about the idea of PhD. I have found a couple of courses that seem perfect for my needs, a Masters in applied sciences with significant research component.

    Does it help to be true to myself and tell my potential mentors what I am actually looking for, since the faculties clearly seem to suggest a PhD after the course? Also, it seems I missed the deadline for this season by a few days, which means I’ll be having so much time to prepare. Should I try and inquire early?

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    1. Thanks!

      You can be honest about wanting a Masters. It’s good to aim high if you’re not sure, but as a PI, I also appreciate students who are open about their goals. And yes, it’s likely (though not necessarily) too late for this fall, but it’s a good time to get a jump on next year! Just be aware that some people don’t work in summer (if it’s a 9-month appointment) or may be in the field, etc.

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      1. Is it better for general inquiries to use a personal email or the university email for doctoral enquiries? I’m considering applying for a doctoral cycle in Gothenburg. And I’m at the université de Toulouse, and I am sending the email to inquire who I contact for thesis research.

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        1. You can absolutely use your university email; it confers legitimacy. Using your personal email is okay, especially if you won’t be at your current institution long, but if your email address is “luvs2hugkittenz@mailchimp.com” then you might opt for a more professional email account.

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  68. Hello,Jacquelyn
    I want to ask question about reaching out Email to school’s Admission Office, how should I write that email, thanks.

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  69. Thanks for sharing this helpful post. Would you please let me know whether the inquiry email I have provided is well-crafted or not.

    Dear Professor XXX,
    I have finished a master degree in Electrical Engineering in the field of Semiconductor Device Technology at the XXX, Tehran, Iran. I am considering applying to XXXX University’s PhD program and would be interested joining your research group for Fall 2017.
    I am personally greatly interested in semiconductor optoelectronic devices. In my master program, I worked on Fabrication and Characterization of GaAs-based Photodiode for Ultraviolet Detection. I read your recent paper, “Design of broadband and high-output power uni-traveling-carrier photodiodes”, on your website (https://users.encs.concordia.ca/~xzhang/index_files/Page359.htm) and was fascinated by your results. In particular, how bandwidth performance of uni-traveling-carrier photodiode can be improved by using graded bandgap structure in its absorption layer.
    Please let me know if there is any funded open PhD position in your research group for me to join. I have attached my CV to this e-mail, but if there is additional information that I have not included that you would like, I would be happy to provide it for you. Thank you for your consideration.
    Looking forward to hearing from you.
    Sincerely,
    Farhood

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    1. I’d say this is pretty good, but I’d cut the line “Please let me know if…” and replace it with “Would you be available to discuss PhD opportunities in your lab?” It’s less presumptuous.

      Good luck!

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  70. Thank you for the interesting points given out. I actually followed the guide given here and sent several letters to professors and couple of them showed some interest. So how should I proceed next? I want to know about any financial assistance that can be offered, which I didn’t mention in my first mail. Is it okay to bring this out in the second mail? Any ideas on what should the second mail be based on?

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    1. I’m glad it was helpful. In terms of following up, that’s going to be very context-dependent, based on the nature of the responses. I think it’s worth doing your homework first when you ask a question, because it shows you’re serious (“I see that there are university fellowships I can apply for, and it looks like teaching assistantships are available. How competitive are those?”. You can also suggest a Skype or phone call and ask questions about funding then — something like, “Is there funding available? What’s typical? I’m also happy to apply for fellowships or other opportunities if that’s a possibility.” Generally, though, I think a second email is a good place to ask if you can set up a call to discuss opportunities further, if you’ve gotten a positive response.

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  71. What if you’re in your mid-40’s and don’t have a TIME MACHINE to go back to your undergrad and grad schools and “make” all those contacts NOW to get all those “recommendations” NOW – and you didn’t back then because things weren’t the way they are now and everything wasn’t requiring all that “back then.” What then? I don’t think I have time to pursue useless certificate programs that don’t require all those references and CV’s covering everything I’ve ever done since HIGH SCHOOL (now almost THIRTY YEARS AGO) and all that. But I’m at a dead-end in any and everything that I’ve ever majored in that I could feasibly call “my fields” as to getting so much as an entry level position in any of them with “just” my Master’s. I”m trying to eke out an existence freelance translating and even all of THAT is demanding a “CV.” Take “early retirement” in a country that has it, where if you haven’t paid into the system because you haven’t been able to scrape together enough work, that translates to “welfare”?? THAT’S what my Master’s degree from Yale is good for now – welfare?Just because it was exactly 20 years ago this year? Even foregoing going through to a PhD program, I’m looking at second Master’s programs and even THOSE are demanding way more accounting for all time since high school than I remember them doing back in 1994-1996!!

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    1. A lot of my colleagues prefer working with people who have been outside of school for some time, and a number of folks I went to graduate school with had taken time off (including students who were in their forties or fifties when they started their graduate programs).

      Taking someone on as a student is a massive investment of our time and resources as faculty, and positions are competitive; letters of recommendation are helpful for us in figuring out whether you’ll be a good fit, or successful. If it’s been a long time since school, and you haven’t been working in your field of choice in the interim, your best bet is to take a few classes so that someone can speak to your skills.

      A CV isn’t an unreasonable expectation for a job or a graduate position. If you think it is, then perhaps further graduate studies may not be a good fit, as there are many more hoops to jump through! Most programs don’t want a day-by-day accounting of your time, just a thoughtful narrative about why you’ve been out of school and what you’d like to get out of going back.

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  72. Hi there, I am a graduate in bioengineering as of May 2015. My original goal was to go to veterinary school, and I am going through the interview processes right now. However, I am not sure veterinary school is what I want to do any more for personal/professional/financial reasons. I have tons of veterinary clinical experience as that is what I did instead of doing undergraduate research. However I did dabble in water quality and environmental engineering with Engineers Without Borders, and I did my own water quality project in Kenya for 6 weeks about water quality of springs and community perceptions of water quality in the area I was volunteering in. I did received an undergraduate grant to complete the project. I decided that I needed to do more with vet stuff so I stopped doing anything related to engineering. Now that I am having these doubts about vet school, I am doing more research into graduate school for environmental engineering to investigate my other interests. I have some questions as I am not sure how to approach the graduate school. I have no lab experience other than that independent research project – what should I do about this? My undergraduate professors know who I am, but I never worked for any of them and I feel uncomfortable approaching them and asking for help regarding programs, letters, etc. I know I need to start by doing some research on what the professors are getting up to at the school I want to go to…. I guess I am feeling a little lost as what to do right now. Any advice you may have is welcome.

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    1. If you don’t have an academic advisor, it’s reasonable to ask a professor for guidance if they’re in your field. We’re there as resources, too.

      My advice would be to find some mentors, start reaching out to professors you’re interested in and ask if you need to fill gaps in your background, and start looking for opportunities to get lab skills. You may need to spend a year or two working in a lab to get experience.

      It does sound like you have a reasonable narrative– changing fields based on a transformative experience, so play that up. You may not need to do anything else. I’d suggest looking into masters programs first. Good luck!

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  73. What are your thoughts on Masters versus PhD in the biological sciences field? I vaguely remember you had some tweets on the subject last spring? I know there are alot of external factors that go into obtaining a desired job (connections, work ethic…etc) and some jobs absolutely need a PhD (directors, professors) but wanted to get your thoughts overall.

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    1. There are opportunity costs to getting a PhD — delaying income, delaying saving for retirement, delaying life in many cases (buying a house, finding a partner, having kids), so it’s never a decision to be taken lightly. I know people who pursued PhDs because they thought they needed one, or they didn’t know what to do next: those are bad reasons.

      It really comes down to career goals, which you may not even know yet. If that’s the case, start with a MS. I’ve noticed lately that students are really eager to jump right into a PhD out of undergrad, and I think this a bad idea for most people. A masters gives you the chance to field test a PhD-length idea, to get experience in the lab and teaching, and to get a feel for how you handle academic life. For me, the MS defense was harder in many ways than then PhD, because it was so new. You’ll know by the end whether you need a break, whether you’re not interested in an academic position, ideally how you feel about teaching or fieldwork (some people discover they hate fieldwork!), etc. Nothing will stop you from launching off a MS into a PhD– you’re arguably in much better shape to keep up that momentum.

      As to whether you need one or both, it’s worth looking at people who hold jobs you can see yourself enjoying. And remember that you can always, always go back and get another degree if you need it — and sometimes, your employer will pay for that (e.g., the National Park Service might fund your PhD if you need one to advance). If you’ve looked at the possibilities and you’re still not sure, or you don’t know what you’d want to do yet, the MS is a good place to start.

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  74. Hello! What a great article, thank-you. I do have a few questions for you and would love your advice. I’m currently working on my CV (was just going to send in a resume-oops!) and my brief email to my potential supervisor for September of 2016. My first question, am I too late? You mentioned to contact a potential supervisor by the latest in September. The application deadline is in two weeks. The second question is what if you didn’t have any close relationships with professors in your undergraduate degree? I adored some professors but am shy and reserved so I’m not sure if I will be memorable.

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    1. It depends on a variety of things — your advisor’s funding, program deadlines, and whether they accept students after admissions deadlines. For example, my department has a soft deadline, but if the advisor has funding, we can accept students up until the week before the semester starts! So it’s never too late to try. They may tell you they don’t have funding and it’s too late this year, or they may have just gotten a grant and are looking — you’ll never know unless you ask!

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  75. Great article. I am trying to send email to a professor (who knows me) regarding my admission status. I need some sample to make it more polite and right to the point, and also it shows my interests. I will appreciate if you can help me with it.

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  76. This article helped a lot, I’m glad I read it before sending out inquiry emails! I am a geology major looks for grad schools, I have great credentials and references but this is definitely going to set me over the edge for prospective research assistantships. What is your overall impression on GRE scores? I recently took the test and feel like I could do better, but it is expensive…

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    1. First, apologies for taking so long to approve your comment — it went into the spam folder! Handling GRE scores varies a lot by institution. In cases where a student is from a non-US system, or if your undergraduate institution didn’t have grades, they may contain some useful information. I personally don’t find them super helpful, or a good indicator of success per se, and I don’t necessarily think schools should have cut-offs for admission if other aspects of the application are strong. Strong GRE scores can help overcome weaknesses in the application, and weak ones don’t help, but they won’t usually make or break an application. Every department will be different, though, and especially in the sciences your quantitative GRE is looked at as an indicator of whether you’ll be able to handle the math and hard science requirements of your program. I recommend talking to your prospective advisor and getting a sense of the culture at your desired institution.

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  77. Hi Jacquelyn,
    I’m curious why you recommend a CV over a resume to share with potential advisors. Professors I have talked to in the natural sciences indicate that they prefer the brevity of a resume and, in fact, this is the only resource I’ve found on the Internet that discourages resumes (or even mentions CVs altogether!) for initial advisor contact. With that said, I’ve already fired off emails with my resume attached…
    Thanks!

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    1. A CV is the standard for academics– a resume is typically a document used in business or other non-academic professional settings. Resumes focus on job history, and CV’s focus on academic history. A resume doesn’t include publications, society memberships, research interests, or relevant coursework, for example. And while your summer job at the YMCA pool may go on a resume, it wouldn’t go on a CV.

      At the undergrad and grad level, CV’s are going to be short anyway, so I don’t see why brevity is an issue– plus, when I’m deciding on whether a student has the right background for my lab, more information is preferable (but that’s my preference). And most grad school and funding applications will explicitly ask for a CV, not a resume. If you’re applying to applied natural resource management-type programs, there may be a different culture, but I’m in ecology and I’ve never encountered a preference for a resume over a CV (to me, it would signal that a student hadn’t done their homework about grad school and may not be ready for prime time).

      I’m not sure where you searched online, but there are a number of resources on the resume/CV difference and grad school:

      http://www.powerscore.com/gre/help/gearingup_resume.cfm

      http://gradschool.cornell.edu/career-services/resumes-and-cvs

      https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/967/02/

      http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/curricula-vitae-cvs-versus-resumes/

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    2. Hi, I am currently in the process of applying for admission to graduate schools in Electrical Engineering department. Since the deadlines for fall session lie mostly in December and I am a little out of time so could you indicate precisely that what would be the best time to ask a professor. Also, can I email professors after application deadlines, would that help?

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      1. Programs will differ — some fields, like chemistry, accept applicants broadly and they do rotations before choosing a lab. For other fields, like ecology or geology, you’ll want that advocate or you may not get accepted if there’s no one who can work with you (that’s how my department is– we often reject strong applicants because there’s not a clear connection to any one faculty member). You’ll want to ask professors as soon as you possibly can. For December and January deadlines, I generally recommend September or October at the latest.

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  78. Greetings! I’m not sure if you’re still responding to comments/questions, but I need your help. I am applying to clinical psychology PhD programs. I have done tons of research on the professors I would love to work with upon acceptance; however, many of the professors are not accepting students for the upcoming year according to the university website. Is it rude to inquire anyway? I would really LOVE to work with these professors because my area of research is unique. If I eliminate my options based on not having a mentor with similar interests, that would leave me applying to two schools.

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    1. I think it’s always okay to check (sometimes the web is out of date), as long as you acknowledge that you saw that they’re not taking students. You can always make a strong case and say “I understand you’re not currently taking students, but I’ve been following your work on X and think I would be a great fit for your lab. Will you be considering taking students in the future, or would you consider someone who brought in their own funding?” You can also ask if they can suggest anyone else out there, as there may be someone new in the field taking students you don’t know yet.

      Applying for two schools can be okay, as long as they’re the RIGHT two schools — the ones that you’ve developed a rapport with.

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  79. Hi! I was curious in regards to asking for letters of reccommendation whether or not the letter should come from someone in the field we’re applying to. For example, I was a dual major in college (ecology and a language). Would it make sense to ask a professor from my language field for a letter of rec for an ecoloy program? Assuming I ask them to comment more on my work ethic and not on my research ability.

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    1. It’s always better to get letters from people who can speak to your success in a graduate program in the field you’re interested in, so definitely prioritize Ecology if that’s what you’re applying to. If you can’t think of three solid letter writers from Ecology, someone in Language could be a good third letter. It’s generally better to have letters from people you’ve done research with, rather than just taken classes from. Letters can make or break an application!

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  80. Hi! this is a great article. I am currently about to contact potential faculty advisers. I just have a couple of problems though: I feel like my CV is spread too thinly. I have done plenty of reading and reflecting but I don’t have enough practical, concrete experience to put on my resume. I don’t know how to bring the fact that I know I have the necessary skills required for my chosen area, in a positive manner. I’m also in a way shifting my focus from what I was doing during under-graduation to what I want to do now. I have taken a gap year and an 11-month long internship to bridge the shift in my interests but I am so unsure about how to make these things appear favorable. Also, I am applying to a whole different country, which adds to the issues. Any advice you could offer about the best way to proceed would be great, thanks!

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    1. This is the case for many undergrads — your CV will feel quite underdeveloped compared with what, say, a PhD will have. For that reason, I recommend adding a couple sections to an undergraduate CV that you may not see on a PhD’s CV, like “Relevant Coursework” (where you might list classes, including short courses, that are related to your field) or “Skills,” which can include programming, field methods, lab analyses, computer programs, languages, or other things that may be important but not listed. You’ll definitely want to list your internship under “Professional Appointments.” For things like gaps, you can address all of that in your cover letter/inquiry letter. Remember that the CV is not the only thing they’ll see!

      Definitely check the conventions for the country you’re applying to. In Europe, it is common to put things like home and family information (e.g., marital status) on a CV, but in the USA this is NOT done.

      Good luck!

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  81. Thank you for the excellent overview and the fact that you are still replying to queries is very encouraging as well. The question though which i had was what if someone has actual field experience in a professional industry and no research experience at all but now want’s to go into a research based masters. How should he include this experience into his CV?.
    I graduated in 2013 with major in mechanical engineering and have diversified experience in 2 very different fields (manufacturing & petrochemical ) so how would you advice about including this information in a CV?.

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    1. Great question. You can definitely add professional experience to a CV– just like a postdoc position. It’s very common for people to take time between degrees, and if the work you did was related to your field, add it to a “Professional Experience” section. This should go right after the “Education” experience. Your personal statement or cover letter can go into details about what those were about.

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  82. Hey Jacquelyn! Thanks for the awesome advice. I’m in the process of applications myself, so I’ll be taking your advice into consideration! Just a question, if you don’t mind giving comments or advice, about the CV. Do you recommend including information on previous research experience that’s completely different from the area that you plan to go into for graduate school? For me, I plan to pursue psychology, but earlier in my undergraduate studies I did quite a bit of research on cellular biology and received a grant award from it. Do you think it’ll look out of place if all my recent experience is much more relevant?

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    1. Go for it! Many undergraduates will have research experience that is totally different from what they pursue in grad school. But knowing that you did it is useful, because it tells me about your work ethic, curiosity, and skill set (statistics, handling equipment, etc.). Professors know that students have a trajectory, too. For my undergrad, I did research with ground-burrowing sea birds, but my senior thesis was in paleoecology (which is what I went to grad school for).

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    2. Great post, lots of useful advice! I am preparing to apply to grad school, but from the position of a PhD graduate with European degrees. The first time around I did Philology, concentration in Renaissance literature (2013), and now I’d like to continue with Medieval Studies. The institution I’ve had my eyes on for two years advises candidates interested in a PhD to take their MA there too (essentially for solid preparation in medieval Latin). I would be thrilled to do it, their MA is what sparked my interest in the first place. I have recently read online, however, that PhD graduates are not preferred PhD candidates. Can that be true? That would mean they are even less agreeable as MA candidates. I would give worlds to be able to discuss my background and situation with someone from the department, but I live thousands of miles away. I do not know whether I should write or call or go there. Who should I talk to first, truly the very first person to contact? Now I also fear that perhaps my foreign credentials might be a hindrance as well, since my letters of recommendation would be coming from people largely unknown to this other institution. Do you think I should go ahead and apply to the MA without previously contacting the department (no supervisor is needed for the MA, this is a no thesis program)? Or maybe contact the chair or a potential PhD supervisor straight away to discuss my intention to finalise at the PhD level? Oh dear, these are so many questions and such a load to bear: I have no undergraduate supervisor to consult with, I wish I did, and my former PhD supervisor, well, he does not know how things are being run here (no disparaging intended).

      Many, many thanks for any advice you might have,
      Laura, Canada

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      1. It’s definitely not unheard of, especially for people changing careers. But given the job prospects in the humanities, consider very carefully what your goal will be.

        In this case, definitely contact the grad coordinator in the department, and talk to some prospective faculty. Even if you don’t need to, you’ll get done good advice, and having an advocate in the department never hurts.

        Good luck!

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  83. Great article – I am in the throws of grad school application now. Contacting professors is my next big step, and I am drafting my inquiry emails. My biggest challenge, mentally, is wrapping my head around making my second choice schools sound as if they are all my first choice. At the same time, I don’t want to spread myself too thin and come across as uncommitted because I have too many options.

    Any advice you may have, I would really appreciate! Your article already has given me a lot of guidance.
    Thanks,
    Steph

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    1. I’d hold off on the idea of first and second-choice schools for now. When you visit and interact with professors, your list will change a LOT. Treat each interaction separately, and don’t bring up where you’re applying unless asked. Applying costs money, too, so that may be a limiting factor. I’d recommend starting with a long list and winnowing down based on email responses. Ultimately, having two to five solid leads is the goal.

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  84. Love your post! I’ve written a few potential inquiry emails but they all keep coming out to around 3 large paragraphs. Is this too long or do you have any suggestions on how long this email should be? Yours is super short, only a paragraph is that what I should be striving for? I want to make sure I include my current research and that takes up a lot of space but I think it’s pertinent for each Prof to know. Let me know and thanks!

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    1. I’m glad it was helpful! Summer is tough because a lot of folks are in the field, at conferences, or on vacation. It’s always okay to follow up in a few weeks. Aim for about the length of my example, if possible. It’s always good practice to be able to get your research down to a sentence or two! Tough, but a good skill to cultivate. Good luck!

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  85. I’m not a ecology student, but I am beginning the grad school application process and this post answered all the questions I was wondering about in terms of the letter of inquiry! Thanks for an awesome post!

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  86. Thanks for the great advice! My question is: when should these inquiries be sent? I have my POI list, and am wondering if I should email now, or later this summer, or maybe right before or right after I send the application in?

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    1. Great question! Summer is rough for a lot of professors, because folks are in the field or at conferences. So, you can get a jump on the communications now, but you may not get a response (conversely, for some people it can be a good time, because most of us aren’t teaching!). If you’re attending a conference, that’s a great time to introduce yourself to someone, and then follow up later.

      Definitely DO NOT WAIT until you send in an application! You’ll want to be communicating with a professor WELL before you apply (and generally, you shouldn’t apply unless and until you’ve got someone in mind to work with — success in grad school is so much more about good mentors than it is about individual schools or programs). In many cases, departments won’t even consider an application that isn’t being supported by a faculty member. At the very latest, start contacting people in September.

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  87. Thank you for the advice! I have a question, though. This passage:

    Saying “I have experience in conceiving, executing, and bringing to fruition an original research project” is pointless if your undergraduate thesis is listed on your CV, and just serves to make you come across as stiff or grasping.

    Can you elaborate it further? What do you mean by ‘grasping’ here? Thanks.

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    1. Grasping as in desperate, clingy, or trying too hard. Those aren’t signs of confidence. It’s always a good idea to let your record speak for itself — highlight what you’ve done, not who you are. Leave the interpretations up to your prospective mentor. 🙂

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  88. Thank you for such a good post, I read it and its quite helping. I wanted to ask you that would it be good idea to go for a Ph.D after completing M.Sc. while you have a business mind more than an academic? I have completed BS in Electrical Engineering in 2013. Secondly i need to support my family after MSc so would i be able to support them while pursuing a PhD. In such conditions which things i should focus on while selecting a thesis or Project based Master. Waiting for your reply.

    Best Regards,
    Muhammad Tayyab Saeed

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    1. Thank you! It really depends on your career goals. If a PhD will help, the go for it — and make sure you are in a program and with an advisor that appreciates the needs of someone who wants to go into industry. Most PhD programs are funded, and include health insurance and a stipend. It can be possible to support a family on this, but you’d most likely qualify for food stamps here in the US! Most people with families in grad school that I know have had a two-person income. Good luck!

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  89. What is your opinion on “follow-ups?” I took your advice and wrote several professors, and the ones that did respond were positive, but concise, basically affirming the desire for me to apply, but not discussing the specific research issues addressed in the body. Is a thank you email warranted? Are these short responses expected, or is that a bad omen of their potential interest?

    Thanks,

    John

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    1. Depending on the time of year you email someone, it’s definitely okay to follow up even if they didn’t respond the first time. If someone’s in the field, at a conference, at the end of the semester, etc., you may or may not have a response right away, and professors are notorious for not getting back to people. Short responses may be more of a reflection of business than interest. I’d respond with a succinct follow-up in that case asking for a phone call to discuss opportunities, as well as funding availability. If they weren’t interested, they’d either not respond at all or say they weren’t taking students/didn’t have funding.

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  90. This is a great article. However, many of my fellow researchers (and admissions deans at some schools, such as NYU and Cornell) have pointed out to me that since a grad student usually has to complete rotations before joining a lab, it is not necessary to contact mentors before applying to the general Ph.D. program. What is your take on this?

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    1. Great question! This is dependent on field, in my experience. I’ve heard of this being common in chemistry or microbiology, for example, but not, say, ecology. You can certainly get into lot of programs even without an advocate, but it definitely helps to have an in!

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  91. This is a great article for those who are looking to apply to grad school. I think the most important part is to be able to establish communication with the professor you would like to work with. If you can do that, you are 50% on your way.

    Do you mind if I post this article link to my blog. Thank you in advance.

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    1. You’re more than welcome to post the text, or link it– whichever you prefer. Everything on this site (unless otherwise stated) has a Creative Commons license for commercial-free use with attribution– so, please just credit me. Thanks!

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  92. I stumbled upon this post through an initial predawn exploration of twitter – retweeted by Karen James.
    I think I’ll share your sage advice with some of my under undergraduates (otherwise known as high school students). I was pleasantly surprised to see John A.’s input (surprised by the connection, not the input; I am a COA grad).

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  93. I was really nervous about this part of the grad school application process, so I asked friends of mine who’d already gotten in to grad school for advice and examples. It was _really_ helpful.

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  94. Jackie, i am probably an old fogie, (no, definitely) but i would probably react negatively to the ‘awesomeness” and “coolness” in the otherwise fine letter. These words tend to be sloppy, hip, and sound insincere as well as suggesting that the applicant has a limited vocab based largely on cable TV. Otherwise some excellent advice.

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    1. Oh, John, I definitely don’t mean those to be literal! I was trying to come up with a silly example. I’ll edit my post to reflect that this was not meant to be taken literally, lest some student get the wrong idea!

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    2. A small point but a good one John. Some undergrads do make the mistake of overemphasizing their enthusiasm, and underemphasizing specifics (why do you want to work with me as opposed to someone else? how will grad school help you achieve your long-term goals? etc.) Being enthusiastic is great. But all prospective grad students are enthusiastic, so conveying enthusiasm doesn’t really make your introductory email stand out from the piles of such emails many supervisors get. Plus, enthusiasm is no substitute for the other elements that go into a good introductory email.

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  95. As much as I dislike the “Dear Mrs. Duffy” emails, the “Dear Sir” ones are the ones that get the immediate delete from me.

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  96. This is a fantastic post. I will be bookmarking it to share with my undergrads in the future. Thanks, Dr. Jacquelyn Gill.

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  97. This is excellent. One additional suggestion: If you have undergraduate mentor/advisors, don’t just see them as letter generators. Talk to them about what programs they might recommend as a fit for you, and even ask them if they’d read a draft of your inquiry letter to places (especially where they might be personally acquainted with a potential advisor.) Not only does this help you improve your inquiry email, it gives the people writing letters on your behalf a better understanding of your interests and priorities in grad school, and might result in an even more insightful letter from them.

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